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Gramophone

[i]The moment
tip of her nipple touches disc
gramophone moans[/i]
krishnasyadav
Written by krishnasyadav (krishnashivkumaryadav)
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Re: Gramophone
13th Sep 2014 9:08am
A beautiful senryu ... the last line is sublime!
LobodeSanPedro
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Re: Gramophone
(krishnashivkumaryadav)
13th Sep 2014 2:14pm
I'm glad you liked it
krishnasyadav
Re: Gramophone
Anonymous
13th Sep 2014 8:51pm
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Re: Gramophone
(krishnashivkumaryadav)
14th Sep 2014 3:42am
Ye thks Sansaint for the read
krishnasyadav

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