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The Rock Bottom Zenith
Those bloodied hands were softer than water
and those killer eyes were brown
his heart ate my soul
swallowing it whole,
shapeless and shameless,
at least I am in.
Published 9th Sep 2014
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2014 9:14pm
That left me speachless ....
Im in to, drawn into your words!!!
Im in to, drawn into your words!!!
Anonymous
10th Sep 2014 7:05am
This is so fantastic, the last line is absolute brilliance!!
10th Sep 2014 2:15pm
12th Sep 2014 2:48am
Always blown away by you. Your style is stark, surrounded with wit, and often accompanied by surpise...
I'm a sucker for short poems as well...
Really enjoyed...
I'm a sucker for short poems as well...
Really enjoyed...
