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Too Much Blubber
Moby Dick had a whale of a penis
I could have shuddered
for momma all night
It was chunkily thick
and slick as a shark
why I've never
encountered such might
When he came,
his tsunami bust down the door
and the sperm tails
all swam in formation
They swallowed the bed
with a rush and a roar
as I screamed
for more lubrication
Oh Moby, you beauty,
how I'd love to conceive
to lie here
and bear you a daughter
But I'm afraid if I did,
too much might go wrong
and she'd just be a fish
out of water
Published 13th Apr 2011
| Edited 2nd Apr 2016
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for God's sake, Abra! i know there's a meaning here, because you're poetic like that, but the images are so terribly distracting i can't get to it yet! i'll reread and i'll get it eventually. [:
13th Apr 2011 12:30pm
There's nothing too deep here, Jezzer - just plain old-fashioned schoolgal humour.
I need it sometimes to balance the darker side of Plath, etc.
Look at em fishies go.
~ A
I need it sometimes to balance the darker side of Plath, etc.
Look at em fishies go.
~ A
