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Him
Nineteen years
Ups and downs
Built a life
Smiles and tears
Feel butterflies
Romantic gestures
Doing my make up
Little black dress
He's sexy still
Now a little grey
I'm so in love
Our lives unreal!
Ups and downs
Built a life
Smiles and tears
Feel butterflies
Romantic gestures
Doing my make up
Little black dress
He's sexy still
Now a little grey
I'm so in love
Our lives unreal!
Published 30th Aug 2014
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30th Aug 2014 4:27pm
Aaaawwww an endearing tale of a love few experience!
lucky are the ones who can do this... :) nice ink
lucky are the ones who can do this... :) nice ink
7th Sep 2014 10:42am
I was feeling aaawwwed when I wroted it.
thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.
Cheers!
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Cheers!
1st Sep 2014 8:07pm
Echo Poetikmind in this age of much shorter-lived marriages and live-in relationships. Heartwarming in the chemistry that still exists in the relationship.
7th Sep 2014 10:44am
Life is short; why stay if it doesn't?
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