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Crossroads
It is a thin line between wrong or right
The wisdom of forgiving or forgetting a mistake
Standing in the dark or stepping to the light
Condemned to Hell or viewing those Pearly Gates
It is a whispered scream in the dead of night.
It is a breath not taken in or exhaled
A raven haired beauty behind a black veil
It is a single tear as the heart feels impaled
Forever weighing the truth with blinded scales
The muzzle of indifference that leaves one broken, bleeding
It is a bruised mirror image, who weeps of abuse overcame
A nation’s intolerances, history that keeps repeating
It is the time to make a difference and quit laying blame.
The wisdom of forgiving or forgetting a mistake
Standing in the dark or stepping to the light
Condemned to Hell or viewing those Pearly Gates
It is a whispered scream in the dead of night.
It is a breath not taken in or exhaled
A raven haired beauty behind a black veil
It is a single tear as the heart feels impaled
Forever weighing the truth with blinded scales
The muzzle of indifference that leaves one broken, bleeding
It is a bruised mirror image, who weeps of abuse overcame
A nation’s intolerances, history that keeps repeating
It is the time to make a difference and quit laying blame.
Published 28th Aug 2014
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28th Aug 2014 11:31pm
29th Aug 2014 4:55pm
Thank you dearest Sir... sooo glad you stopped in for a lil read.. Hope you are doing well my friend.. with much respect.. xoxo domore
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28th Aug 2014 11:54pm
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Thank you Jack..
Pleasure to see you visit.
I will agree that oft times change of the grand scheme does involve tumult and sacrifice. Furthermore.. you are correct.. that finding like minded people for endeavors of change.. to make a difference in society is beneficial.
That being said.. I think the most important step to any positive strides.. is opening our own minds and hearts.. to not allow negativity (in all its many facets) to dissuade us from a higher path of service, growth, development, community, and care for our fellow man.. in order to make a difference .. we must start first with ourselves..
Thank you again for the read and kind comment.. with respect.. domore
Pleasure to see you visit.
I will agree that oft times change of the grand scheme does involve tumult and sacrifice. Furthermore.. you are correct.. that finding like minded people for endeavors of change.. to make a difference in society is beneficial.
That being said.. I think the most important step to any positive strides.. is opening our own minds and hearts.. to not allow negativity (in all its many facets) to dissuade us from a higher path of service, growth, development, community, and care for our fellow man.. in order to make a difference .. we must start first with ourselves..
Thank you again for the read and kind comment.. with respect.. domore
29th Aug 2014 1:48am
Lovely write Domore. This is a masterfully crafted. Smooth character with a profound message. Who can resist words displayed with such grace.
29th Aug 2014 5:14pm
Dearest Awakened... You humble me with your kind and thoughtful comment.. .it is a pleasure to know you think this worthy of a place within your RL. I am sincerely touched. with deepest respect.. domore :)
29th Aug 2014 10:12pm
Lovely Lady, your beautiful, positive mind
stands tall and speaks to all who bear witness.
I love your expressions regarding our need to care,
and care enough to attempt making a difference.
Be part of the solution, not the difficulty.
Solve the problem, not the blame.
Excellent write!
xoxo
YFLB
stands tall and speaks to all who bear witness.
I love your expressions regarding our need to care,
and care enough to attempt making a difference.
Be part of the solution, not the difficulty.
Solve the problem, not the blame.
Excellent write!
xoxo
YFLB
:) SweeTT Man...
You are ever kind with your comments..
so full of support in my writing.
You're a ray of light that warms me and
brightens my everyday...
Thank you for ALL...
It brings a smile to my face..
that you get me..
and get this write..
xoxoxo YLLCG
can one throw money for a comment??. if so.. consider it raining :)
You are ever kind with your comments..
so full of support in my writing.
You're a ray of light that warms me and
brightens my everyday...
Thank you for ALL...
It brings a smile to my face..
that you get me..
and get this write..
xoxoxo YLLCG
can one throw money for a comment??. if so.. consider it raining :)
