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Our Gravity
Experience a new gravity
Center's pulling together
A force from within
Trying to get closer and closer
Wanting to feel the depth
Of uncensored passion
Let our world's orbit
To another dimension
Rage against surrender
Into oblivion
Universe collapsing
To knees of submission
Escaping our realities
Lost in forever
Into a realm of our core
to our very center
Center's pulling together
A force from within
Trying to get closer and closer
Wanting to feel the depth
Of uncensored passion
Let our world's orbit
To another dimension
Rage against surrender
Into oblivion
Universe collapsing
To knees of submission
Escaping our realities
Lost in forever
Into a realm of our core
to our very center
Published 25th Aug 2014
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25th Aug 2014 5:53pm
Sweet astral grace. Colliding worlds, illuminating in a spectral dance of erotic sensations. Love it!
17th Sep 2014 4:13am
Blue Angel, once again you bring the hues of sensual grace orbiting my land.
25th Aug 2014 7:15pm
AS sir the force of the gravitational pull has never felt this sensual to me. What a vision u have left me with
Xoxoxo
Belle
Xoxoxo
Belle
Heavy pulling of ones senses
Into the core of my intentions
Drift into a world
Of A life of domination
Into the core of my intentions
Drift into a world
Of A life of domination
17th Sep 2014 4:18pm
Your dominance is ever so present
No matter the situation Sir
You r truly a force all your own
Constantly pulling me in
No matter the situation Sir
You r truly a force all your own
Constantly pulling me in
26th Aug 2014 00:38am
This is....is....um.....pulling the gravity of my soul. What A great relationship this must be. Feel so close to another being. Beautiful!! Pleasure to see you writing again. Xo :)
11th Sep 2014 1:21am
If one can not give all to the point we fall in... Then what is the point. Thank you always hun, you always feel the words that escape me
10th Sep 2014 11:59pm
11th Sep 2014 1:24am
Thanks man, this was a fun write for me. Your words press upon me man, truly lifting feeling, thank you
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11th Sep 2014 1:26am
Breath baby, inhale the path to a heaven of lost reality.
Thank you darling, appreciate your kind words draping across my letters making them more beautiful
Thank you darling, appreciate your kind words draping across my letters making them more beautiful
22nd Sep 2014 9:03pm
23rd Sep 2014 00:24am
Thank you CasketSharpe, honored you travel to my realm and turned my pages.
23rd Oct 2014 9:20am
this was Heavy and Heated..your pen is truly a force to be reckoned with..i enjoyed immensely!!!
this line:
"Rage against surrender
Into oblivion " was mesmerizing
this line:
"Rage against surrender
Into oblivion " was mesmerizing
14th Nov 2014 00:13am
