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Fire
My lips set ablaze of fire from the horizon of curves that I crest
Cascading across supple landscape
That lingers on the edges
Of dreams
Bending to reality
Feeling the fire upon your neck
My breath of a burning heart
Your scent the accelerant
Igniting the passion that clings
To the strings of your desires
That melt within my heat
Exposing wounds hidden under scars
Still open and breathing
Feel them fade
In my intense burning
As they fade in the smoke
Swallowed into my shadows
Born from our intense heat
Marks of branding decorate your body
Kisses you can touch and see
Penetrating deep
Felt so fucking deep
Filled with real emotions
Pain
Lust
Love
Agony
But most of all
Wisdom
Understanding all
The comforts of no judgement
Yes
Yes No judgement
Kisses of freedom
Feel the fangs
Digging spikes of molten lust
Into Your veins
Twisting your core
Enslaved by my flames
You will be burned
Of what is me
Fire
Cascading across supple landscape
That lingers on the edges
Of dreams
Bending to reality
Feeling the fire upon your neck
My breath of a burning heart
Your scent the accelerant
Igniting the passion that clings
To the strings of your desires
That melt within my heat
Exposing wounds hidden under scars
Still open and breathing
Feel them fade
In my intense burning
As they fade in the smoke
Swallowed into my shadows
Born from our intense heat
Marks of branding decorate your body
Kisses you can touch and see
Penetrating deep
Felt so fucking deep
Filled with real emotions
Pain
Lust
Love
Agony
But most of all
Wisdom
Understanding all
The comforts of no judgement
Yes
Yes No judgement
Kisses of freedom
Feel the fangs
Digging spikes of molten lust
Into Your veins
Twisting your core
Enslaved by my flames
You will be burned
Of what is me
Fire
Published 12th Sep 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
12th Sep 2014 4:09pm
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I couldn't agree more Lily
Not sure when it became ok to be judged for thoughts and feelings that area natural to our being. Thank you always for your comments. Humbled beyond reason to line the edges of your private pages.
Not sure when it became ok to be judged for thoughts and feelings that area natural to our being. Thank you always for your comments. Humbled beyond reason to line the edges of your private pages.
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
12th Sep 2014 5:00pm
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12th Sep 2014 4:48pm
Have Mercy!!!! I think the heat I feel running thru my body is not just a hot flash. LOL!!! This is a masterpiece of flames. You have definitely set DU on fire with this one. RL for me most assured. More than enjoyed this. Welcome back!!! Xo :)
12th Sep 2014 4:59pm
Sweet flower, you are fond of fire for your passion runs deep. Honored to be in your vault of treasures. Thank you always
12th Sep 2014 7:41pm
14th Sep 2014 1:17am
Anonymous
13th Sep 2014 12:18pm
~singing
but when we kiss... ooooh... fire...
"Pain
Lust
Love
Agony But most of all
Wisdom
Understanding all"
while this piece is nothing short of scorching seduction, the above stands out like a flickering flame in the dark
so few will ever understand the delicate dance of domination and submission... of living your [sensual] truth free of judgment...
you write this warm shiver with unparalleled skill, Sir
but when we kiss... ooooh... fire...
"Pain
Lust
Love
Agony But most of all
Wisdom
Understanding all"
while this piece is nothing short of scorching seduction, the above stands out like a flickering flame in the dark
so few will ever understand the delicate dance of domination and submission... of living your [sensual] truth free of judgment...
you write this warm shiver with unparalleled skill, Sir
14th Sep 2014 1:20am
Hello Earth Child,
Kean perception and gracious comment. Thank you for seeing the words as you felt them, I am truly honored
Kean perception and gracious comment. Thank you for seeing the words as you felt them, I am truly honored
13th Sep 2014 2:17pm
Whoa, think I burned my retinas! very passionate, hot spillage bro! Now, will someone plz call an ambulance? lol
14th Sep 2014 1:21am
Little hot I gather....
Thanks always for your props and most of all your time as you chose to flip my pages.
Thanks always for your props and most of all your time as you chose to flip my pages.
13th Sep 2014 2:38pm
Engulfed in the flames
Of unbridled desire
Thirst is quenched
By unending carnal gifts
The offerings of a bite
Perfect kiss
Lick
Or touch of your strap
Loved this my dear AS. Like flower going on my list
Of unbridled desire
Thirst is quenched
By unending carnal gifts
The offerings of a bite
Perfect kiss
Lick
Or touch of your strap
Loved this my dear AS. Like flower going on my list
14th Sep 2014 1:26am
Nectar beeding off your body
Like sweet summer rain
Dripping from your flesh
Into the intense flame
Scorching desire
Meeting needing wetness
A perfect storm
Fierce and violent
Until silence
And tenderness
Like sweet summer rain
Dripping from your flesh
Into the intense flame
Scorching desire
Meeting needing wetness
A perfect storm
Fierce and violent
Until silence
And tenderness
21st Sep 2014 6:04pm
A fervent passion
risen from ashes
Melting quick
against his flame.
Intense diction. She praises his nature upon weakened knees. Pleasing, oh so pleasing.
risen from ashes
Melting quick
against his flame.
Intense diction. She praises his nature upon weakened knees. Pleasing, oh so pleasing.
1st Oct 2014 5:32pm
Pleased by the blue knees of a quivering Angel rising in the heat, the gift that is you allowing the hot breeze to even touch your skin.
23rd Sep 2014 4:14am
open flames of passion in this. noticing the distinctive art of the branded in kisses...
1st Oct 2014 11:46pm
1st Oct 2014 12:38pm
as i've already commented, i'll reiterate how much i loved this piece & add it to my reading list to enjoy again & again.
much enjoyed
much enjoyed
1st Oct 2014 11:44pm
Temped to cling to the intense flame
Soothing warmth that invites you
Again
And again
I am very humbled to have your nails scratching the parchments that I blaze.
Thank you so much
Soothing warmth that invites you
Again
And again
I am very humbled to have your nails scratching the parchments that I blaze.
Thank you so much
23rd Oct 2014 5:56pm
Reading this poem burst my mind and eyes to flames. Makes such intensifying passion with those words. I loved it!!
23rd Oct 2014 9:33pm
Thank you Lord, just realized with that line why you chose that user name, damn clever
15th Jul 2015 1:22am
15th Jul 2015 2:58am
A chant of wild fire, to resist the flame is to get burned.
Thank you kindly
Thank you kindly
