Heartbeat. (An erotic story)

Heartbeat. It's beating fast, Everything is silent, I can almost hear my pulse, I can feel it in my ears. I'm walking through the woods, moonlight lighting up the path. Shadows of the trees looming over me. One foot in front of the other. I'm not sure where I'm going, my breathing is still. Just walking forward, deeper into the woods. I hear a crack. And I tense up. Hair on the back of my neck standing up. He's near now. I can feel it in my bones. In the weakness of my knees. Goose bumps trail up my thighs.

Another crack and I stand still, scanning my surroundings when strong arms swoop in around me. Lifting me up, I let out a little scream. I feel your lips brush my neck. Lightly kissing my neck you whisper, "found you." You set me back on my feet and I turn around to face you. Pressing into you, I bring my lips to your mouth and breathe "yes, yes you did." I kiss you, firmly, my tongue slipping between your lips. Grabbing at each other, you walking me backwards pushing me into a tree. Your lips on my neck hot and heavy, your hands gripping my butt. My hands around your neck and nails in your hair. I can hear a low noise escaping your mouth. I press my knees together, in plea. I can feel myself needing you, squirming under your touch. I'm wet and I'm ready. I tug your shirt off and you remove mine. I'm running my hands up your chest and I kiss you sweetly, lingering there for a moment, than with a giggle I take off running.

Wearing a white lace bra that almost glows and short shorts, I had lost my shoes a ways back. I turn to look over my shoulder and I've got a lead. I'm running and laughing. I can hear you not far behind. Jumping behind a bush, you run right by. Now I'm chasing you. Right at your heels, you stop and turn around sensing me behind you. I take a step forward and push into you falling backwards. Me falling right on top. Our faces just inches apart. I stare into your eyes, everything is still and all that matters right now is this moment. Me, here with you.

Abruptly your pushing me off and are now on top. Almost like instinct my legs spread for you. Grass tickling me everywhere my bare skin touches. You kiss me and I arch my hips towards you and you do the same, pushing into me. I can feel you hard against me. And I slip into a comatose as to what it would feel like to have you inside me finally. You suck on my lower lip and push into me again, my hands grip into the dirt and I moan out loudly. In one swift motion my bra is off and you’re griping my breast as they stand on edge for you. Responding to your every touch. With your lips you trail kisses down my face, neck towards my nipples where you suck and nibble. My breath catches and my hands are at your button. Unbuttoning and unzipping, I push you off firmly into the grass and pull your pants and boxers off. All of you slipping out. Kissing down your chest. Taking a hold of you, all of you standing on edge. I kiss your tip and lick the pre cum that is gathered there and you moan. Rubbing your balls I slip you between my lips and move. Sucking. Moving. Sucking hard. You moaning and having a hard time holding back. I can feel a throb, your pulse in my mouth and I pull back. With a grin I get up and leave you there.

You, disoriented. I start running towards the clearing, towards the edge. I jump. Right off the cliff. Fifty feet down I’m falling and floating in air all at once. A scream catches in my mouth but doesn’t release. Breaking the water surface I’m underwater. My heart pumping from the adrenaline. I push back up through the water, I gasp for air. Looking up at the cliff there’s no sign of you. I swim towards the beach, watching the current and the reflection of the moon in the water. As I get closer I see you. Walking out of the tree line, you put your briefs back on. But I can see you haven’t quite settled down yet. I pull off my shorts, thong in the water and just abandon them there. Getting closer, I can touch the ground, walking now towards you. The water falling off my body. Completely naked, a step closer to you. You meet me at the edge of the tide.

“My wild one.” You say and pick me up, my legs instantly going around you. My body soaked and sticking to you. Still holding me, you sit down on the sand. Me straddling you, the tide tickling our feet. The light catches your eyes. I see that you’ve had enough teasing. You have your hands on my hips and I bend to reach your lips. Kissing you deeply, like I’ve wanted to for so many restless nights. I feel your hand move and then I feel the tip of you against me. You press forward and enter me slowly; I can feel you pushing forward. Filling me, I let out a moan. Turning me over, you push me into the sand never breaking connection. You on top, in control the way I want you to be. Sucking on my lips. You move and we move together. Were one. My nails are digging into your back. I can’t get enough, moaning so loud. “Baby, yes.” I say. Thrusting forward you bite my lip, hard. My whole body clenches and reacts. My inner muscles clenching together on you. You moan. Thrusting and moving, the feeling of you as you pull out but push right back in. My thighs are quivering; you’re hard as a rock, feeling me up. My breast squished against your chest. I bite into your neck and squeeze my internal muscles with everything I’ve got. As if in sink, I cum and you cum at the same time. My legs wrapped around your waist. You releasing inside me. Finally. You relax into me, laying on me. Not pulling out, just lingering there. My legs still trembling.

Moving my hair out of my face, looking into my eyes and kissing me softly. Sweaty, stuck together. I can feel your heartbeat racing and you can feel mine. I’ve never felt closer to you. I look up into your eyes and see you. There’s no one else I rather be looking at right now.
In this very moment,
perfect,
with you.

So I'm thinking of writing a romance novel, do you think I should pursue it? Criticism and opinion much appreciated! -xx