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freak like me
as words pierce my black heart,
looking daggers oh so sharp.
show no pain, show no fear,
for i am the strong one, shed no tear.
i dress in black and might act strange,
but this is who i am, i'll never change.
come join the darkness, meet the reaper,
as he shall be your soul keeper.
im still human no matter what they say,
im equal to everyone in every way.
it's the inner beauty you can not see...
even in a freak like me
looking daggers oh so sharp.
show no pain, show no fear,
for i am the strong one, shed no tear.
i dress in black and might act strange,
but this is who i am, i'll never change.
come join the darkness, meet the reaper,
as he shall be your soul keeper.
im still human no matter what they say,
im equal to everyone in every way.
it's the inner beauty you can not see...
even in a freak like me
Published 10th Apr 2011
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10th Apr 2011 1:59pm
i loved it! i can relate cuz emos get treated the same way :/ really good dudette
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10th Apr 2011 2:33pm
meh.....yeah pretty much XD everyone else is like 2 or 3 years older but i'm also the outcast
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10th Apr 2011 2:40pm
hahahaha i just hate preps dear,my ex that is the inspiration of most my cuts and poems was a uber prep.....but with a dark side....i loved her :(
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10th Apr 2011 2:54pm
i can handle you my dear,can you handle me? be back later for a few so keep watch <3 xoxox
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10th Apr 2011 5:13pm
hahaha you just think you can love,you'd be surprised. i'm packing up to "go" so i'll talk wif you when i can. goodbye my love <3
10th Apr 2011 5:21pm
May I interject at this point? Just to let you know, there is a private message feature on the site where you won't clog the 'Latest Comments' page with your replies on this poem. Alternatively, you can start a forum thread for your conversation.
10th Apr 2011 5:27pm
yes i know i just got a bit carried away..thats all anway what did you think of the poem?
10th Apr 2011 5:29pm
its ok,we like everyone to see that emos and goths can have feelings,including for eachother
10th Apr 2011 5:33pm
In which case, you could use a forum thread where everyone can watch you flirt if they want to, and those who don't care can get on with the Latest Comments.
10th Apr 2011 5:34pm
10th Apr 2011 5:39pm
To make a thread:
- Click on the "Forums" tab that is at the top of every page.
- Click on the "General Discussion" category
- Click the grey "new thread" button on the top right of the topics list
Hope that helps.
- Click on the "Forums" tab that is at the top of every page.
- Click on the "General Discussion" category
- Click the grey "new thread" button on the top right of the topics list
Hope that helps.
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11th Apr 2011 5:38pm
omg i can so relate to this poem its awsome! the poet is amazing at writing
