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Once a sister , now a liar
I looked up to you, and gave you my trust,
But now all you are is a dirty little liar ...
But now all you are is a dirty little liar ...
Published 20th Aug 2014
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Anonymous
21st Aug 2014 1:09am
Biatch tew enigma dat sheet ain't wryte sista poeit
21st Aug 2014 1:10am
Anonymous
31st Aug 2014 1:58am
This sad poem has tones of Jeremy Kyle about it. I am sorry you are feeling so hurt. I hope you can both settle this row one day.
31st Aug 2014 3:01am
Aw haha , the Jeremy Kyle bit made me laugh xD but thank you for leaving a comment , i hoped so too , but there is only so many times you can be lied too , and it comes to a point when you have to say enough is enough sadly , but thank you again c:
Anonymous
7th Sep 2014 11:25am
This triggered some repressed instances of broken trust a lifes reality .
hope you ok now friend (:
hope you ok now friend (:
7th Sep 2014 1:03pm
Aww , thanks for leaving a comment, things look like they are on there way to being mended but I'm still not sure whether i will be able to trust again :>
