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Nature
Nature will take you by surprise. When you step outside your door, for instance, there will be a sudden soft wind in coolness that envelopes your senses; it was sent on that path just for you – that’s the secret to life. Nobody really knows the secret, but it gives you the sweetest feeling of being alive.
Published 20th Aug 2014
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Anonymous
20th Aug 2014 3:05am
Awwwww dat's beeeeeutiffull.
Roachmill
Roachmill
20th Aug 2014 3:27am
Anonymous
20th Aug 2014 10:52am
this is sweet, I feel it could use a little more depth-
I might be missing it though...still a lovely read
I might be missing it though...still a lovely read
This one in particular came from the preceding journal piece; you missed it. Its very simple - hence the brevity. As well, it's there to create your own value. Thank you for commenting.
20th Aug 2014 3:40pm
Sometimes, Pishashee, luv, that sudden soft coolness is just what's needed, a hint of nature's life reaffirmation. If there is the scent of lilacs as well, that just makes everything even better as far as I'm concerned... :-*
20th Aug 2014 5:09pm
Beautiful lilacs...! I love a hint of honeysuckle that I can never seem to find where they're at. Thank you.. :)
How wonderful! I almost said honeysuckle too, but I didn't want to be greedy what with having already commandeered the lilacs... :-p
20th Aug 2014 4:37pm
Its relative to this: when you're just driving along and all of a sudden you're there. How does that happen - and what is the thought process? I truly don't know. I don't know the who, what, when, why, or where the guidance comes from, but somehow you can't be thinking. It's a surprising thought...:) a little harry scary(the driving part). I like the breeze though...:)
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