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Re: Alpha and Omega
19th Aug 2014 8:23pm
Vivid imagery with a curious edge of seductivity that leaves one guessing if this is a prayer or a poem of love. JH
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re: Re: Alpha and Omega
This was an entry to a competition selected for publication in Serendipity Magazine.com
hosted here on Dup about the element water. This is my impression of the devastating effects of water.
I imagined being dragged off shore by gale force waves and then plunged into the deep only to suffocate and drown.
Thanks for the read Poetryman!!!
Broomie
hosted here on Dup about the element water. This is my impression of the devastating effects of water.
I imagined being dragged off shore by gale force waves and then plunged into the deep only to suffocate and drown.
Thanks for the read Poetryman!!!
Broomie
Re: Alpha and Omega
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re: Re: Alpha and Omega
20th Aug 2014 00:56am
Hello Gabriel
Yes I was forced to drink the salted water I became in engulfed in.
Nice to see you and thank you for the read ")
Broomie
Yes I was forced to drink the salted water I became in engulfed in.
Nice to see you and thank you for the read ")
Broomie
Re: Alpha and Omega
20th Aug 2014 3:17am
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20th Aug 2014 4:51am
Re: Alpha and Omega
20th Aug 2014 4:10am
re: Re: Alpha and Omega
20th Aug 2014 4:54am
(((((((( Enigma ))))))))
I gotta say I had a piss poor day today and your comments brought a few smiles to my face today!
Thank you sweet and kind lady ")
Broomie Xxxxx
I gotta say I had a piss poor day today and your comments brought a few smiles to my face today!
Thank you sweet and kind lady ")
Broomie Xxxxx
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20th Aug 2014 3:41pm
Aww, hehe, I'm glad I managed to bring a smile to your face :')
Hope you have a lovely day c: x
Hope you have a lovely day c: x
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Re: Alpha and Omega
20th Aug 2014 1:39pm
You know though it's a piece about the power of nature
It can just as easily be a sensual piece about
two people caught up in a passionate n tumultuous relationship :) outstanding!
It can just as easily be a sensual piece about
two people caught up in a passionate n tumultuous relationship :) outstanding!
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re: Re: Alpha and Omega
20th Aug 2014 5:47pm
I can't see it that way but hey it's cool to know it can be taken in different ways!
Thanks for the read Po
Always
Jackie Xoxoxox
Thanks for the read Po
Always
Jackie Xoxoxox
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Re: Re. Alpha & Omega (visual poem)
10th Jan 2021 00:42am
Hello there Reggie :) hey thanks for reading and understanding what it means, it’s refreshing
You’re the best my friend thank you for the list
Always your friend and sister
Jackie 🤗😘💜
You’re the best my friend thank you for the list
Always your friend and sister
Jackie 🤗😘💜