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His Ink
If I was your unfinished page
what would you write, upon
my blank, ivory flesh
Letters, that were glorious
in color as they made
contact, with my body?
If you spoke out loud, your
voice, it would get me, drunk,
speak, I want to taste the ink
on your lips
Will you let me soak up your
words, let me quench my
thirst, would you watch me, swallow?
what would you write, upon
my blank, ivory flesh
Letters, that were glorious
in color as they made
contact, with my body?
If you spoke out loud, your
voice, it would get me, drunk,
speak, I want to taste the ink
on your lips
Will you let me soak up your
words, let me quench my
thirst, would you watch me, swallow?
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2014 7:26pm
Visceral... skin that aches to be etched.
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4th Aug 2014 7:56pm
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2014 8:22pm
Awesome poem Tommie
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4th Aug 2014 10:56pm
Tommie, I really like this piece. My favorite stanza is this:
"If you spoke out loud, your
voice, it would get me, drunk,
speak, I want to taste the ink
on your lips "
I would write:
Sensual Goddess
Priestess of Passion
Soul Seductress
"If you spoke out loud, your
voice, it would get me, drunk,
speak, I want to taste the ink
on your lips "
I would write:
Sensual Goddess
Priestess of Passion
Soul Seductress
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5th Aug 2014 1:41am
So dripping with sensuality, Tommie Lynn, luv :-*.
Your imagery is delicious and the urge to brush the words onto your skin with finest sable brushes and edible pigments then disturb them off with lips and tongue and mouth - Mmm... ;-)
Your imagery is delicious and the urge to brush the words onto your skin with finest sable brushes and edible pigments then disturb them off with lips and tongue and mouth - Mmm... ;-)
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