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In the bath
Please forgive any distortion in the audio this time as I actually recorded while in the bath.
I thought of you when I took my bath today
Tendrils of steam
Mingle
Coalesce with
Fragrant oils
Coconut
Lotus
Thousands of miles apart
Yet
Connected
By droplets
Sliding down my nape
In my bath
Across oceans
Through rainforests
And amidst humid jungles
Sweat
Gathered at the small of your back
I want to taste that
Essence of you
Distilled and earthy
You tell me
Tantric
Acolyte
That I am like
Females depicted in ancient
Texts from ages past
Unlike
Others
You
Have
Known
I find this difficult to believe yet
Irrelevant
Except that I am bewitched
By thoughts of ancient texts
And comparisons to
These
Wild
Dreams
Linked
By waters
Saliferous
Do visions of scarlet streaming against my chocolate taunt you?
You say you want to
Bite
Me
Make me bleed
And lick that from my body as you plunge yourself deep, oh deep into me.
When you say these things,
I want them too and that surprises me
Disconcerts me
Frightens me
Stimulates me
You want me to
Bite You back
Make You bleed
Lap the blood
Embrace my wild
Am I this wild?
You think so.
Some inner, primal part of me thinks so too.
Surging seas
These needs
Are tidal
Tribal
Primordial
Undeniable
Cannot be washed
Away.
I thought of you when I took my bath today
Tendrils of steam
Mingle
Coalesce with
Fragrant oils
Coconut
Lotus
Thousands of miles apart
Yet
Connected
By droplets
Sliding down my nape
In my bath
Across oceans
Through rainforests
And amidst humid jungles
Sweat
Gathered at the small of your back
I want to taste that
Essence of you
Distilled and earthy
You tell me
Tantric
Acolyte
That I am like
Females depicted in ancient
Texts from ages past
Unlike
Others
You
Have
Known
I find this difficult to believe yet
Irrelevant
Except that I am bewitched
By thoughts of ancient texts
And comparisons to
These
Wild
Dreams
Linked
By waters
Saliferous
Do visions of scarlet streaming against my chocolate taunt you?
You say you want to
Bite
Me
Make me bleed
And lick that from my body as you plunge yourself deep, oh deep into me.
When you say these things,
I want them too and that surprises me
Disconcerts me
Frightens me
Stimulates me
You want me to
Bite You back
Make You bleed
Lap the blood
Embrace my wild
Am I this wild?
You think so.
Some inner, primal part of me thinks so too.
Surging seas
These needs
Are tidal
Tribal
Primordial
Undeniable
Cannot be washed
Away.
Published 1st Aug 2014
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 1:27am
Enjoyed the tantalizing and vivid journey :) as always
2nd Aug 2014 6:18pm
Thank you, SugarSkull, luv :-*.
I am glad I was able to engage you in my journey, luv. :-*
I am glad I was able to engage you in my journey, luv. :-*
1st Aug 2014 3:29am
2nd Aug 2014 6:21pm
Thank you very much, JohnFeddeler, luv :-*.
I am extremely honored you are using this as a definition for wet now. :-*
I am extremely honored you are using this as a definition for wet now. :-*
1st Aug 2014 5:51am
"These
Wild
Dreams"
Ya think! :)
Sizzling in every sense, Savaja.
I salute you.
Wild
Dreams"
Ya think! :)
Sizzling in every sense, Savaja.
I salute you.
2nd Aug 2014 6:25pm
Ah, VegasPoet, luv :-* ~
I fear you have me at a loss. I know not how to interpret what you have written. I am afraid you will have to explain further, luv.
However, to the second part of what you wrote I say, thank you very much! A salute from you is akin to the salute of royalty, luv. :-*
I fear you have me at a loss. I know not how to interpret what you have written. I am afraid you will have to explain further, luv.
However, to the second part of what you wrote I say, thank you very much! A salute from you is akin to the salute of royalty, luv. :-*
1st Aug 2014 7:51am
Wow Savaja! It is I who have missed so much not reading your poetry. This piece is super-sensual and deeply enhanced by your voice and the sound of the bathwater. The erotic images conjured are stuff of dreams, the imagined scents are intoxicating and the sounds place a wash cloth in my hand gently caressing curves. A true feast for the senses. Bravisima Savaja!
2nd Aug 2014 6:35pm
Thank you, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-*.
The more I read of your work, the more grateful I am to have come upon it at any time. :-*
I find myself so entranced by what you say here, I can barely respond. I am glad you found here a feast for your senses to indulge. ;-)
The more I read of your work, the more grateful I am to have come upon it at any time. :-*
I find myself so entranced by what you say here, I can barely respond. I am glad you found here a feast for your senses to indulge. ;-)
1st Aug 2014 8:03am
well now... who's leaving who speechless...
if i'm spending too much time in the bath with that magic rubber ducky ~ you'll be conveniently blamed ;)
if i'm spending too much time in the bath with that magic rubber ducky ~ you'll be conveniently blamed ;)
2nd Aug 2014 6:38pm
Ah, Snowcrystal, luv :-* ~
That is an excellent query.
Today, I am. Tomorrow, you again. And so the circle turns, the seasons come and go. :-p
Blame away, luv. 'Tis only fair considering what's been going on over here... ;-)
That is an excellent query.
Today, I am. Tomorrow, you again. And so the circle turns, the seasons come and go. :-p
Blame away, luv. 'Tis only fair considering what's been going on over here... ;-)
1st Aug 2014 10:15am
I think this is my favourite poem of yours Savaja....
Whoever he is, he has described you as I would....
This poem is oh so sensuous....
Somehow a softer side we see...
Love it.... :)
Whoever he is, he has described you as I would....
This poem is oh so sensuous....
Somehow a softer side we see...
Love it.... :)
2nd Aug 2014 6:41pm
Thank you very much, GeniusGirl, luv :-*.
Ahhh, my very favorite super-heroine! I'll let you see all my softness, luv... ;-)
Ahhh, my very favorite super-heroine! I'll let you see all my softness, luv... ;-)
1st Aug 2014 1:04pm
This reminds me of my bdsm days.
I want to beat you and I want you to want that ...
Except your is eloquent and violently sensual.
This is kind of a breakout write for you Savaja.
All the power but with love and grace...
I want to beat you and I want you to want that ...
Except your is eloquent and violently sensual.
This is kind of a breakout write for you Savaja.
All the power but with love and grace...
2nd Aug 2014 6:47pm
Ahhhh, Granite, luv :-* ~
You have no idea the C4 you set, do you? Or perhaps you do, oh Visionary. I know not.
If you don't know by now that I've wanted you to beat me since first I realized how much a Dom you were, I may have to revise the title of Visionary...
Oh, how I've desired that. The need has fair brought me to my knees.
Thank you for your gracious praise, Sir.
You have no idea the C4 you set, do you? Or perhaps you do, oh Visionary. I know not.
If you don't know by now that I've wanted you to beat me since first I realized how much a Dom you were, I may have to revise the title of Visionary...
Oh, how I've desired that. The need has fair brought me to my knees.
Thank you for your gracious praise, Sir.
1st Aug 2014 6:46pm
2nd Aug 2014 6:54pm
Thank you, xmar82, luv :-*.
I rather adore baths. They are my secret vice. I may well be a sybarite where they are concerned, okay, especially where they are concerned. ;-)
Thank you, luv. :-*
I rather adore baths. They are my secret vice. I may well be a sybarite where they are concerned, okay, especially where they are concerned. ;-)
Thank you, luv. :-*
1st Aug 2014 11:12pm
2nd Aug 2014 7:21pm
Thank you, Erotic Ninja, luv :-* !
I am glad you found this writing appealing to your sight and senses, luv. ;-)
Mmm... :-*
I am glad you found this writing appealing to your sight and senses, luv. ;-)
Mmm... :-*
2nd Aug 2014 6:57pm
2nd Aug 2014 7:28pm
4th Aug 2014 4:03am
WOW Sweets that was HOT!!!
The effects by itself was arousing!!
Love your writes!!
Pleasure too read over and over!!
Don't bite hard! LOL!!
Sir Lancelott
The effects by itself was arousing!!
Love your writes!!
Pleasure too read over and over!!
Don't bite hard! LOL!!
Sir Lancelott
Thank you very much, Sir Lancelott, luv :-*.
I am flattered that you find repeated pleasure in rereading my work, luv. Feel free to revisit any time. :-*
I am flattered that you find repeated pleasure in rereading my work, luv. Feel free to revisit any time. :-*
4th Aug 2014 5:13am
4th Aug 2014 5:34am
Thank you very much, blackhyde, luv :-*.
I am glad, indeed, you enjoyed my voice and writing, luv. :-*
I am glad, indeed, you enjoyed my voice and writing, luv. :-*
4th Aug 2014 12:17pm
Ahhh, Tantric Acolyte, luv :-* ~
Glad I am to invoke speechlessness in turn in you...
Glad I am to invoke speechlessness in turn in you...
8th Aug 2014 6:05am
8th Aug 2014 6:32am
