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daft
slumped over puffy-eyed
haven't cried for hours
wishing that burnt hair
smell would go away
don't forget the wings have teeth
crickets don't chirp
when they rub their feet
hammer down the sickle
I busted a hump doing that
or so I was told
but if I could see
through my eyelids
it wouldn't help
me give a shit
you can't lead water
to a camel
haven't cried for hours
wishing that burnt hair
smell would go away
don't forget the wings have teeth
crickets don't chirp
when they rub their feet
hammer down the sickle
I busted a hump doing that
or so I was told
but if I could see
through my eyelids
it wouldn't help
me give a shit
you can't lead water
to a camel
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Re: daft
30th Jul 2014 7:03am
Fireglacier, luv :-* ~
This is amazing and incredible and wonderful and demented. And, I love it! :-*
This is amazing and incredible and wonderful and demented. And, I love it! :-*
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Re: daft
Thanks a lot for the visit and kind words, Savaja. Always a pleasure... =)
I was in rare form on this one... ;)
I was in rare form on this one... ;)
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31st Jul 2014 11:50pm
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1st Aug 2014 00:58am
Thanks Paul, I appreciate that... I think it's a bit out there for some >< that's ok though.... =)
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3rd Aug 2014 2:32pm
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4th Aug 2014 5:31am
kinda tired of sparring w/life & getting sucker punched: you got that feeling down pretty well...
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4th Aug 2014 5:49am