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If we could only rewind time
Your heart is so onyx
But you say you love me
How? I feel cold when you touch me
I shiver at the thought
It's over isn't it? this story of ours
No happy ending
Just love torn apart
All those years so many shed tears
Done over
Just like that
There has to be a rewind button
Some way to get them years back
I think this over and over
so many thoughts in my head
Where did we go wrong
Where did we let our love story end
But you say you love me
How? I feel cold when you touch me
I shiver at the thought
It's over isn't it? this story of ours
No happy ending
Just love torn apart
All those years so many shed tears
Done over
Just like that
There has to be a rewind button
Some way to get them years back
I think this over and over
so many thoughts in my head
Where did we go wrong
Where did we let our love story end
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Heartfelt
6th Apr 2011 8:10pm
Heartfelt poem..so touching..I can feel your pain..I sometimes wish for a rewind button too..peace Crim :)
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re: Heartfelt
6th Apr 2011 8:12pm
Oh yea I think many have. But after watching the movie click not so much lol.. Thanks crim
i'd rather not have such a button
Anonymous
6th Apr 2011 9:21pm
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re: i'd rather not have such a button
6th Apr 2011 10:41pm
Yea it means so I wouldn't have lost so many years I want them back thanks for the read ;)
lost time
Anonymous
6th Apr 2011 10:52pm
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7th Apr 2011 1:53am
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Yes....
7th Apr 2011 1:22am
.....if we could turn back the hands of time. But since we don't possess that power, we must make our present and future resemble the past we long for. Wow......this causes reflection on my own life (had a bad day!)
A good poem or story should cause just those feelings.....
Good Work. : )
A good poem or story should cause just those feelings.....
Good Work. : )
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re: Yes....
7th Apr 2011 1:50am
Nice
7th Apr 2011 4:01am
This relates to something i wrote some time ago
I like it. It's real, and it's simple
I like it. It's real, and it's simple
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re: Nice
7th Apr 2011 4:21am
Re: If we could only rewind time
2nd Jul 2014 6:03am