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Clams and Virgins
I went for a long walk and thought about a great many things.
I thought about a lot of things but not nearly enough.
Some of us don't have breakdowns.
We go on long walks that take us nowhere.
Some of us listen when we want to be screaming.
I thought about a lot of things but not nearly enough.
Some of us don't have breakdowns.
We go on long walks that take us nowhere.
Some of us listen when we want to be screaming.
Published 26th Jul 2014
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Anonymous
24th Apr 2015 7:38am
really liked the first four lines. they work well together. don't feel like the fifth line is right, or earned... and its all because of the word "screaming." i'd like to see this expanded where the last line seems more like it fits as a conclusion. i know, i don't have that right, but i liked the first four lines a lot and i was wishing it went further.
