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Memories ...

Memories, can't hold me like you did, yesterday.              
Feelings will not fade like colors of old elm leaves.              
Just so you know my tomorrows are filled with the              
time for together, remember how good life was.              
             
Standing here, lying there, cold in this summer air.              
Empty space, lonely place, everywhere that we shared.              
Close my eyes, out of place, see your face, long ago.              
Life can be wonderful, till we depart from all.              
             
You gave me love so real, always believe in you.              
We're apart, life has lost true meaning, I miss you.        
Memories.

Note. Form is dactylic tetrameter, give it a try...
Written by jvp
Published | Edited 29th Jul 2014
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