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Let Me
Let me taste your fear with my moist tongue
Feel you swell in my mouth
Your fragrance sticky on my face
Let me fill you with my life
Til my soul leaves my body
And your petals shatter
Feel you swell in my mouth
Your fragrance sticky on my face
Let me fill you with my life
Til my soul leaves my body
And your petals shatter
Published 26th Jul 2014
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26th Jul 2014 2:49am
26th Jul 2014 2:52am
26th Jul 2014 6:37am
I'm tingling...a sure sign of a stirring sensual experience. Thank you Tommie. You move me :)
26th Jul 2014 2:31pm
27th Jul 2014 7:42am
Not bad, it was very sensuous, but it was a little too short but it's still pretty lovely.
27th Jul 2014 3:52pm
If I can say what I want with a few short words, why babble? I think my point is very clear in this...less is more.
I'm glad you find this lovely MsR. Thank you :)
I'm glad you find this lovely MsR. Thank you :)
27th Jul 2014 9:02pm
You got a point no one really likes a poem that just goes on and on without an ending or anything getting to it and you're welcome Tommie :)
