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My Match
You make me
A little
Crazy
Fevered
With you
I find I want
To make you
A little
Crazy
Too
Feverish
With me
Consumed
By
Eroticism
Dripping with my honey
Consumed
By
Desire
Dripping with your cream
I want you
All over me
My body
Covered
In
Your
Scent
Besplatter me
Despoil me
Ensconce me
Torrents
Of
Opal
Glimmering
On
Me
I intend to
Bedaub you
Desecrate you
Encompass you
Freshets
Of
Nectar
Shimmering
On
You
Let
No
One
And
Nothing
Stand
In
Your
Way
I'm waiting
Impatiently
(What else did you expect?) :-p
A little
Crazy
Fevered
With you
I find I want
To make you
A little
Crazy
Too
Feverish
With me
Consumed
By
Eroticism
Dripping with my honey
Consumed
By
Desire
Dripping with your cream
I want you
All over me
My body
Covered
In
Your
Scent
Besplatter me
Despoil me
Ensconce me
Torrents
Of
Opal
Glimmering
On
Me
I intend to
Bedaub you
Desecrate you
Encompass you
Freshets
Of
Nectar
Shimmering
On
You
Let
No
One
And
Nothing
Stand
In
Your
Way
I'm waiting
Impatiently
(What else did you expect?) :-p
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Re: My Match
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2014 10:48am
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Oh Jack Tex, luv :-*, I've been rather inspired, don't you know?
Thank you for your vociferous and extremely munificent comments about my lexicon, luv. I am in vaunted company, indeed, with Herman Melville.
You keep speaking of kissing me. I think you mean to torment me, Mephistopheles. You even added hugs this time, you Devil!
If you add biting...
The only thing that remains, luv, is for you to discover the extent of my "congeniality" then.
Impatiently...
Thank you for your vociferous and extremely munificent comments about my lexicon, luv. I am in vaunted company, indeed, with Herman Melville.
You keep speaking of kissing me. I think you mean to torment me, Mephistopheles. You even added hugs this time, you Devil!
If you add biting...
The only thing that remains, luv, is for you to discover the extent of my "congeniality" then.
Impatiently...
Re: My Match
Sexy and passionate please continue to inspire me your words make it well your sexy girl♥
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re: Re: My Match
Thank you, seascape, luv :-* ~
While not in my purview, your inspiration is an unanticipated entrustment of which I am, perhaps, unworthy. We are all driven by our muses.
Thank you, seascape, luv; you're rather sexy as well...
While not in my purview, your inspiration is an unanticipated entrustment of which I am, perhaps, unworthy. We are all driven by our muses.
Thank you, seascape, luv; you're rather sexy as well...
Re: My Match
23rd Jul 2014 11:36am
o.O i think i'm gonna go fifty fifty on a rape charge with DiscipleofLife after reading this lol
gawds woman, you got me all hot and bothered now. smoking hot ink xoxo
gawds woman, you got me all hot and bothered now. smoking hot ink xoxo
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re: Re: My Match
23rd Jul 2014 11:17pm
Winter (_shadoe_)Snowcrystal, luv :-* ~
I am utterly shocked! Shocked, I tell you! You and Fenom (DiscipleofLife)Fireglacier 50/50 on such a charge when both of you know very well, VERY WELL, precisely what would be occurring here and that would not be it.
Tell the truth, luvs, as soon as you CHOSE to read, consensuality occurred, did it not? :-* I merely penned the lines. (Okay, okay, I confess...I uttered those words as well. Still, if you listened, choice was involved again, ne c'est pas mes amies?) :-*
J'ai mes besoins aussi... :-p
I am utterly shocked! Shocked, I tell you! You and Fenom (DiscipleofLife)Fireglacier 50/50 on such a charge when both of you know very well, VERY WELL, precisely what would be occurring here and that would not be it.
Tell the truth, luvs, as soon as you CHOSE to read, consensuality occurred, did it not? :-* I merely penned the lines. (Okay, okay, I confess...I uttered those words as well. Still, if you listened, choice was involved again, ne c'est pas mes amies?) :-*
J'ai mes besoins aussi... :-p
Re: My Match
24th Jul 2014 4:17am
Yes, Savaja. It is always about choice.
The words in this piece were chosen wisely
and brilliantly assembled.
Superb.
The words in this piece were chosen wisely
and brilliantly assembled.
Superb.
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re: Re: My Match
24th Jul 2014 4:42am
Thank you very much, VegasPoet, luv :-* ~
I fret, Sir, that you may wreathe me with too much praise here when I but hearken to the muse's call. I am humbled by your words extolling wise choice and brilliant assemblage.
Thank you so much for your kind and generous words, luv :-*.
I fret, Sir, that you may wreathe me with too much praise here when I but hearken to the muse's call. I am humbled by your words extolling wise choice and brilliant assemblage.
Thank you so much for your kind and generous words, luv :-*.
Re: My Match
24th Jul 2014 4:31am
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24th Jul 2014 4:43am
Re: My Match
24th Jul 2014 6:38am
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24th Jul 2014 3:23pm
Why, thank you, JohnFeddeler, luv :-* ~
Your endorsement is always a welcome and warmth-producing sight. ;-)
Your endorsement is always a welcome and warmth-producing sight. ;-)
Re: My Match
26th Jul 2014 8:17pm
HELL, Bring it on sweets!!
Love this piece!!
The line at your place will be getting long soon!!!LOL!
Awesome read!!
Sir Lancelott
Love this piece!!
The line at your place will be getting long soon!!!LOL!
Awesome read!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: My Match
26th Jul 2014 8:26pm
Thank you, Sir Lancelott,luv :-* ~
Glad I am that you found this piece to your joy.
Hmmm...
My place is not so easily found... ;-)
Thank you again for your commendation, luv :-*
Glad I am that you found this piece to your joy.
Hmmm...
My place is not so easily found... ;-)
Thank you again for your commendation, luv :-*
Re: My Match
27th Jul 2014 10:14pm
Get it in gear, Boy! Someone's ready to go! I feel the urge pulsating and building in this poem. Great write.
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re: Re: My Match
27th Jul 2014 10:45pm
Re: My Match
Savaja, DAMN! this is so hot..I usually don't like that descriptor but DAMN this is hot! My favorite stanzas:
"I want you
All over me
My body
Covered
In
Your
Scent"
"Torrents
Of
Opal
Glimmering
On
Me"
"I want you
All over me
My body
Covered
In
Your
Scent"
"Torrents
Of
Opal
Glimmering
On
Me"
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re: Re: My Match
3rd Aug 2014 11:55am
Thank you, thank you, thank you Gahddess_Worship, luv :-*!
This, I believe, is very high praise, indeed, luv! :-*
I treasure this and you, luv. :-*
This, I believe, is very high praise, indeed, luv! :-*
I treasure this and you, luv. :-*