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Are You There ?
Will I know you
as you truly are.
Will you hold me
in your arms forever.
Will I feel your
love explode in my heart
will you touch me so softly
and rock me in your bosom.
Will I know the truth.
Will I know,the real you.
as you truly are.
Will you hold me
in your arms forever.
Will I feel your
love explode in my heart
will you touch me so softly
and rock me in your bosom.
Will I know the truth.
Will I know,the real you.
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Re: Are You There ?
22nd Jul 2014 10:33pm
Re: Are You There ?
22nd Jul 2014 10:50pm
we're all just trying to get
to know each other, without
giving our selves away..:)
a poignant plea, my friend...
to know each other, without
giving our selves away..:)
a poignant plea, my friend...
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23rd Jul 2014 00:28am
Re: Are You There ?
22nd Jul 2014 10:57pm
Heres to Hopes and Dreams Hash-Everyone needs at least some of them true!!!
Excellence Sir!!!
Excellence Sir!!!
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23rd Jul 2014 00:29am
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23rd Jul 2014 00:35am
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24th Jul 2014 00:33am
Re: Are You There ?
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2014 2:43am
i think if someone is deserving we will open up completely, but trust is important. Well penned Mr. Hash.
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re: Re: Are You There ?
24th Jul 2014 00:35am
Re: Are You There ?
23rd Jul 2014 7:07pm
Such a poignant plea, my friend....
It seems as though we all practice a bit of self-preservation--especially if we have been deeply betrayed, at some point, in our past.
But....i still believe if souls were meant to bind, then somehow, love will find the way to allow two hearts, in trust, to beat as one.
a sweetly sad, yet powerful piece!!
It seems as though we all practice a bit of self-preservation--especially if we have been deeply betrayed, at some point, in our past.
But....i still believe if souls were meant to bind, then somehow, love will find the way to allow two hearts, in trust, to beat as one.
a sweetly sad, yet powerful piece!!
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24th Jul 2014 00:36am
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2014 00:24am
I hope with all my heart that all love will be yours.
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24th Jul 2014 00:38am
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26th Jul 2014 5:16am
Soft and gentle Hashman, what a sweetheart you are!
Great piece my friend ")
Zazzles
Great piece my friend ")
Zazzles
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