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Summer
Translucent
Glistening
Turquoise
Lambent pool
Reflecting
Alabaster
Puffs
Strewn as if by some
Careless
Deity
Lazily decorating today
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Re: Summer
18th Jul 2014 7:45pm
it's a very lucid observance; watching the gods shuffle clouds around languidly...
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re: Re: Summer
18th Jul 2014 8:52pm
Thank you, JohnFeddeler, luv :-*. This feels like high praise from you, luv, and I am honored. :-*
Re: Summer
19th Jul 2014 11:24am
You're presentation of the written words ... seemingly in haphazard manner adds to the effect of moving clouds ... I'm always impressed when a writer does this with just the right piece
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re: Re: Summer
19th Jul 2014 3:42pm
Re: Summer
19th Jul 2014 5:27pm
feels like i'm laying on my back, picking petals from daisies and watching the heavens drift by...
love the deep sense of peace evoked by this
love the deep sense of peace evoked by this
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re: Re: Summer
19th Jul 2014 6:22pm
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19th Jul 2014 6:22pm
Re: Summer
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20th Jul 2014 1:43pm
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re: Re: Summer
Ahhh, Jack, luv :-* ~
You bedevil me betimes! All right. You would that we would discuss this further; then so we shall, exhaustively, in-depth, each tiny permutation.
Do, but give me leave to completely seek all information regarding this, including veriest origin, before you drive me mad... :-p
A week, give me but a week - all right three days at least.
I AM glad restfulness and repose were sweetly bestowed upon thee, luv. :-*
You bedevil me betimes! All right. You would that we would discuss this further; then so we shall, exhaustively, in-depth, each tiny permutation.
Do, but give me leave to completely seek all information regarding this, including veriest origin, before you drive me mad... :-p
A week, give me but a week - all right three days at least.
I AM glad restfulness and repose were sweetly bestowed upon thee, luv. :-*
Re: Summer
20th Jul 2014 9:17pm
Serene scene, of beauty and wonder placed up in the sky for us to enjoy and contemplate on it's creator. Enjoyed.
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re: Re: Summer
21st Jul 2014 00:11am
Re: Summer
This is a serene piece, Savaja. That you chose to be specifically in the present with this stanza:
"Careless
Deity
Lazily decorating today"
Makes the piece come to life. Thank you for this peaceful interlude...I've gotta learn Tai Chi to connect my soul more with nature.
"Careless
Deity
Lazily decorating today"
Makes the piece come to life. Thank you for this peaceful interlude...I've gotta learn Tai Chi to connect my soul more with nature.
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re: Re: Summer
6th Aug 2014 11:54pm
Thank you very much, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-* ~
You are most welcome. I took some T'ai Chi. It is the most amazing tranquil workout I have ever done. :-*
You are most welcome. I took some T'ai Chi. It is the most amazing tranquil workout I have ever done. :-*
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7th Aug 2014 00:03am