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Making your body talk
Blackness takes hold from the softness of cotton spreads
Trapping the soul to speak through the body that is held
Holding your intentions of lust that squirm of drooling need
Greedy pulses filling your heated moans of “please take me”
Your skin tensing to blind touches that grip of want seeping in
Leaving tracks of desire of uncontrolled lust possessing
From the scent of untouched folds trembling for attention
Lifting your desire into my control with your sexy lacing
Untying wishes of your sinful thoughts with my finger tips
As I listen to your body talk
Whispering
whimpering
“I am yours tonight
Please come in”
Trapping the soul to speak through the body that is held
Holding your intentions of lust that squirm of drooling need
Greedy pulses filling your heated moans of “please take me”
Your skin tensing to blind touches that grip of want seeping in
Leaving tracks of desire of uncontrolled lust possessing
From the scent of untouched folds trembling for attention
Lifting your desire into my control with your sexy lacing
Untying wishes of your sinful thoughts with my finger tips
As I listen to your body talk
Whispering
whimpering
“I am yours tonight
Please come in”
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Re: Making your body talk
Anonymous
17th Jul 2014 5:57pm
Oh YES! YES! "Take Me"......alluring and sexy. No doubt she wont resist the temptation. Mmmmmm! Arousing ink! Enjoyed! Xo :)
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re: Re: Making your body talk
17th Jul 2014 6:00pm
Oh sexy Flower you make me smile, a smile that will last through the day
Thank you
Thank you
re: Re: Making your body talk
17th Jul 2014 8:25pm
Was that you or your body talking, no matter I hear you anyway.
Welcome to my page, truly appreciate your comment
Welcome to my page, truly appreciate your comment
Re: Making your body talk
17th Jul 2014 8:07pm
Awakened.. vivid imagery.. as usual you give a sensual journey that is truly a delight..
"Untying wishes of your sinful thoughts with my finger tips" wellll that'll make your body talk!!.. or at least make 80% of all readers feel lovely. :):) with deepest respect..domore
"Untying wishes of your sinful thoughts with my finger tips" wellll that'll make your body talk!!.. or at least make 80% of all readers feel lovely. :):) with deepest respect..domore
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re: Re: Making your body talk
17th Jul 2014 8:28pm
Domore, my heavenly delight, may your whispers be captured under the ominous moon light.
I am always grateful for your wondrous visits.
I am always grateful for your wondrous visits.
Re: Making your body talk
17th Jul 2014 8:41pm
She is incoherent and lacking comprehension from the way you're making her body talk in foreign languages, speaking in tongues; cunnilingus conversation and deep, deep dialogue....
....yes, make her body talk! Sexy ink,G...Xo
....yes, make her body talk! Sexy ink,G...Xo
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re: Re: Making your body talk
18th Jul 2014 1:35pm
"cunnilingus conversation"
filling my mouth with singing release, love the way she talks to me.
Rain, Damn you have a way with words
filling my mouth with singing release, love the way she talks to me.
Rain, Damn you have a way with words
Re: Making your body talk
Anonymous
17th Jul 2014 9:00pm
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re: Re: Making your body talk
18th Jul 2014 1:36pm
Re: Making your body talk
18th Jul 2014 11:43am
Oh my......what a hot write to wake up to! Truly grateful that im still n bed
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re: Re: Making your body talk
18th Jul 2014 1:38pm
A good morning it is. I hope the conversation is rewarding under the sheets.
Thank you Southbell, You brought me happy thoughts this morning
Thank you Southbell, You brought me happy thoughts this morning
Re: Making your body talk
21st Jul 2014 5:57pm
i don't think i'd be polite enough to manage a please at that point lol
"Leaving tracks of desire of
uncontrolled lust possessing"
oh yes... delicious
"Leaving tracks of desire of
uncontrolled lust possessing"
oh yes... delicious
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21st Jul 2014 7:05pm
"i don't think i'd be polite enough to manage a please at that point"
That is just your dirty girl wanting a spanking first talking ;)
Thank you Shadoe, your embraces of heated words are a welcome singe upon my pages
That is just your dirty girl wanting a spanking first talking ;)
Thank you Shadoe, your embraces of heated words are a welcome singe upon my pages
Re: Making your body talk
22nd Jul 2014 9:49pm
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23rd Jul 2014 1:36pm
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24th Jul 2014 00:14am
Re: Making your body talk
23rd Jul 2014 2:03pm
Exquisite body talk. Simply delicious ravaging of the senses. Love it !! ❤
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23rd Jul 2014 5:37pm
Crawl beneath the wings of my ravens breath
heated demands screaming from my clutches
leaving imprints upon tethered skin
laced in carnal whispers unheard
tangling you into my sins
Thank you always Blue Angel
heated demands screaming from my clutches
leaving imprints upon tethered skin
laced in carnal whispers unheard
tangling you into my sins
Thank you always Blue Angel
Re: Making your body talk
7th Aug 2014 2:03pm
well awakenedsoul....
you words have stirred us....
very good....like it.... :)
you words have stirred us....
very good....like it.... :)
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re: Re: Making your body talk
7th Aug 2014 3:10pm
The pleasure was all mine Kate, thank you for visiting my domain and enjoying yourself.
Re: Making your body talk
14th Aug 2014 4:39pm
“please take me”
even i got aroused
what can i say
abut her desire
she will want more '
last nite i composed one
tis here similar
no prize won
All my youth i spent
hoping to spend it in you
and
all my life i spent
wishing you had spent it in me
why didn't you?
even i got aroused
what can i say
abut her desire
she will want more '
last nite i composed one
tis here similar
no prize won
All my youth i spent
hoping to spend it in you
and
all my life i spent
wishing you had spent it in me
why didn't you?
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Anonymous
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15th Jul 2015 3:12am
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re: Re: Making your body talk
15th Jul 2015 3:43am