Cheated By Life

@Jack,i think its more of the pain of the humiliation than Jealousy.
Yes you let go,but how do you live with that knowledge everyday?Also of knowing that everybody else knows that you you were not good enough coz that's the mentality the audience* carries,"its the victim fault"  They say."You drove him to cheating...."

MMMhhh!Good question jack!This would be a great discussion...!

Great read Scarlett!

Thanks sincerely.  

This poem was written for a comp.  The originator of the forum wanted us to write about the idea of "killing the messenger" but as part of the prompt wanted a twist.  I've read many literary pieces where the messenger is killed, to send a message but never where the messenger kills themselves to send the message.  Also, I had in mind that leaving your husband and ending your relationship with your sister would feel like relationship suicide.  I love this forums thought provoking discussions.  Writers need discussions like this. Thanks as always. xo

Blunt and chilling
the ultimate guilt trip
always impressed with your style
unflinching and calculating
no apologies

Love reading everything you write

Mr. Speak
xxo

Thank You Poet. Unforgiving indeed.  xo

I mean Thank You Mr. Speak

Wow...powerful, sad ink... I can't imagine the immense hurt
that would drive one to kill themselves over a
unfaithful partner... Me? I'd probably be moved
to do something stupid but not something that bad...

Suicide is a very strong topic.  I defiantly do not write on the subject lightly.  It's a hard sad part of the human existence.  I work with a suicidal population and my experience has been that the individuals truly do not see another way out.  Very intense and very sad.  Thanks for stopping by.

I agree baby n I'm happy to see ur a strong n positive
voice helping those in need of it... Ur amazing :)

Thank You for identifying xo

She wants death more than revenge.
Truly tragic and very potent.

Tragic indeed.  xoxo.  Thanks as always for checking it out and your warranted feedback :)

The sad truth of someone who believes happiness comes from someone else, she was lost before it all began, sad write my dear, executed nicely

Thank You completely

Message delivered indeed! This is a very clever twist, suicidal slam, very powerful write, great job.

Thanks ultra.  Glad you liked it!!!!

definately a great twist in this. something needed to be deleted, so she deleted herself...

Decheated

Engaging story, stunning twist.  Bravo.

Thanks kindly

Betrayal is hard to take. Pride takes precedent. Good write Scarlett.

Again, Thank You

This is potent and concise.
It has no excess words what so ever.
And what a perfect story to get an emotional response out of the reader.
I felt it in the pit of my stomach.