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she is the other half
with a light touch
her ivory hand
sails smoothly
over his coal
colored skin
she looks through
his deep brown
eyes and sees a
place of comfort
in her eyes he
sees heaven a
sky so big and
blue
his embrace is
like water
becoming her
and her him
she dare not say
it the word she feels
whenever near him
he is beautiful
she is the other
half that makes
them that way
her ivory hand
sails smoothly
over his coal
colored skin
she looks through
his deep brown
eyes and sees a
place of comfort
in her eyes he
sees heaven a
sky so big and
blue
his embrace is
like water
becoming her
and her him
she dare not say
it the word she feels
whenever near him
he is beautiful
she is the other
half that makes
them that way
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Re: she is the other half
Anonymous
8th Jul 2014 5:04pm
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re: Re: she is the other half
8th Jul 2014 5:36pm
I like that... "a beautiful ballet skin on skin"... ;)
I always appreciate your feedback Jack.
Thank you ;)
I always appreciate your feedback Jack.
Thank you ;)
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8th Jul 2014 5:08pm
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8th Jul 2014 5:20pm
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8th Jul 2014 8:17pm
Lovely warm contrast of colour and sex. The pic vertically expresses the interracial horizontal desire.
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8th Jul 2014 8:20pm
Re: she is the other half
8th Jul 2014 8:29pm
under all covers of darkness
there is no colour
as bright as black is
black beauty
have you ever heard about it
under cover of darkness
no light is needed
we all remain glued
you know it
eyes closed in blissful imagination
the hard hit is on
we orgasm
even in darkness
there is no colour
as bright as black is
black beauty
have you ever heard about it
under cover of darkness
no light is needed
we all remain glued
you know it
eyes closed in blissful imagination
the hard hit is on
we orgasm
even in darkness
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8th Jul 2014 8:47pm
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8th Jul 2014 10:16pm
u r eyes see beauty
that is no surprise
that's why men for u rise
is that not wise
thanks Tommy
ur 2 good 4 me
in poetry erotica or any
thanks for remembering
that is no surprise
that's why men for u rise
is that not wise
thanks Tommy
ur 2 good 4 me
in poetry erotica or any
thanks for remembering
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8th Jul 2014 10:54pm
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9th Jul 2014 00:41am
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9th Jul 2014 2:21am
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9th Jul 2014 3:12am
Re: she is the other half
Could not help but think up two rhyming captions to the pic:
His blackness, set against her white,
Make for a most on-turning sight;
The arms round each other's torsos
Make for a most suggestive pose;
Her right foot strode between his feet
Make this sensuous scene complete.
The other I thought having noticed her hair in old-fashioned bun:
She asked, "Just one thing; take out my hairpin;
Let me feel my hair fall down on my skin,
And then we will be naturally bare,
To follow our hearts and take it from there."
It has also inspired a much longer poem I will publish separately in this section.
His blackness, set against her white,
Make for a most on-turning sight;
The arms round each other's torsos
Make for a most suggestive pose;
Her right foot strode between his feet
Make this sensuous scene complete.
The other I thought having noticed her hair in old-fashioned bun:
She asked, "Just one thing; take out my hairpin;
Let me feel my hair fall down on my skin,
And then we will be naturally bare,
To follow our hearts and take it from there."
It has also inspired a much longer poem I will publish separately in this section.
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re: Re: she is the other half
10th Jul 2014 00:50am
Re: she is the other half
It came to mind, thinking of the same pic today, of a poem inspired by it:
Our nakedness, contrast of skin,
Heightens in us the sense of sin
'Gainst those who preach that black and white
Should never in the flesh unite.
To me, you are a better man
Than those who'd join the Ku Klux Klan,
Who, coward fashion, hood in white
When they congregate day or night.
By lying with you in the hay,
I'm following a better way
By making love, and not this war
Pursued to settle their old score.
Our nakedness, contrast of skin,
Heightens in us the sense of sin
'Gainst those who preach that black and white
Should never in the flesh unite.
To me, you are a better man
Than those who'd join the Ku Klux Klan,
Who, coward fashion, hood in white
When they congregate day or night.
By lying with you in the hay,
I'm following a better way
By making love, and not this war
Pursued to settle their old score.
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