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I WANT THAT
I want that summertime,that pure dIvine,that his and hers,that yours and mine,that butterfly high in the sky,that funny moment when our tongues tied,speechless,cuz neither one could understand,how lady luck just waved her hand,and brought forth such a humble woman and a humble man among creatures,of deceit and lies,one hitter quitters,one minute guys,gold digging women,too many ties,too many "I's", no room for we,eyes blind to facts only you can see? I want better,that almond joy,smooth as silk man,yet a playful boy,has a rough hand yet a soft touch,supports me when im down and brings me back up,my king,and queen am i,no room for nickels, no room for dimes,no down bitches,im not bae or boo, i get monday through friday and the weekends too,im honey, his sweet tooth,that divine honesty and beautiful truth,my name floats from his lips like a musical lyric,that moves me in a way that enlightens my spirit,i need that tall glass of iced tea,nothing can quench my thirst more than he,not only does he love me for me,he also sees the potential in me,and i in him,that powerful bond cemented in friendship,brought closer by courtship,never a need to force it,that fire,that slow burn,make my knees weak,make my soul yearn,when our eyes meet all trust is earned,that magic,i want that summertime,that pure divine,that his and hers,that yours and mine,that Maxwell,that lifetime......I WANT THAT
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28th Jul 2014 10:20am
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2014 8:23pm
Love how you read - do you do slams?

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8th Aug 2014 10:10pm
there arent very many where i live but yes i do thanks for taking the time to hear me out
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4th Aug 2014 8:15pm
Read talk love that spoken swag know better then beautiful speech if truth my banana next to your peach just something to reply saying hello to say good-bye itz mak millz from the chi-town keeping it real. I enjoy the craft you layout without doubt KEEP it up
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9th Aug 2014 11:49pm
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10th Aug 2014 00:19am
Phlawlissflow, luv :-* ~
I really, really like this poem. You have this honesty and joie de vivre that is wonderful to behold here. You remind me of someone quite dear to me who, I know, would echo these sentiments.
Thank you for sharing with us, luv. :-*
I really, really like this poem. You have this honesty and joie de vivre that is wonderful to behold here. You remind me of someone quite dear to me who, I know, would echo these sentiments.
Thank you for sharing with us, luv. :-*
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21st Aug 2014 9:13pm
Oh Dear! it is so beautiful... I already pictured it at my wedding... your slam instead of the usual music. This is truly and simply beautiful!
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13th Sep 2014 8:46pm
I enjoyed this greatly! Your ink and delivery remind me of a few Maxwell songs including Woman's Worth and Pretty Wings
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