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Chaos
the languid night embraces me
morning light shines on me no more
a face born of pain takes refuge in the shadows
chaos my master
peace an afterthought I've cast aside
I ride the waves of discontent
happy in my grief
demonic opaque eyes stare into my soul
demanding answers from me that I can't give
disenchanted I find no fascination in life
the most hearty of wine ash on my tongue
my pallet tainted by the darkness that consumes
twists and contorts the psyche
the monster in me feeding grows daily
it's gaping maw feasting from my being
I've reached for heaven
taken refuge in hell
this is where I find contentment
deluded and lonely
demons my only entertainment
they amuse and abuse
licking my soul clean
tasty little treat
I'm but meat for the beast
morning light shines on me no more
a face born of pain takes refuge in the shadows
chaos my master
peace an afterthought I've cast aside
I ride the waves of discontent
happy in my grief
demonic opaque eyes stare into my soul
demanding answers from me that I can't give
disenchanted I find no fascination in life
the most hearty of wine ash on my tongue
my pallet tainted by the darkness that consumes
twists and contorts the psyche
the monster in me feeding grows daily
it's gaping maw feasting from my being
I've reached for heaven
taken refuge in hell
this is where I find contentment
deluded and lonely
demons my only entertainment
they amuse and abuse
licking my soul clean
tasty little treat
I'm but meat for the beast
Published 7th Jul 2014
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7th Jul 2014 7:52pm
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7th Jul 2014 8:10pm
Yes!! The Lovely Crim is back!! Dark poetry written raw and with intellect.. deadly combo my dear friend.. this gave me chills in the reading..
8th Jul 2014 9:58am
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7th Jul 2014 8:17pm
..beautiful chaos this is...
I loved -> "I've reached for heaven
taken refuge in hell
this is where I find contentment"
Lovely darkness, Crim! Xo
I loved -> "I've reached for heaven
taken refuge in hell
this is where I find contentment"
Lovely darkness, Crim! Xo
8th Jul 2014 9:59am
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8th Jul 2014 00:41am
Ouch! very powerful Crim. I love the way you describe what you're thinking, feeling...
You are a talent and a half dear lady..
I enjoyed this.
Always
Broom Xx
You are a talent and a half dear lady..
I enjoyed this.
Always
Broom Xx
8th Jul 2014 10:02am
thank you lovely Broom for such a gracious comment and add to you RL :) with love Crim
8th Jul 2014 1:10am
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8th Jul 2014 1:40am
Crushing turmoil Miss Crim. It feels like it'll never end sometimes, huh? Your not alone here. Just remember that. Power and love to you girl. xo
8th Jul 2014 10:04am
thank you for reminding me I'm not alone.. thank you for the love :) with love Brenda
8th Jul 2014 2:09am
It's Always a fight even in languish-Deep from the Well Dear Crim-As Always!!!
8th Jul 2014 10:05am
8th Jul 2014 8:22am
there's always a pattern unseen in the chaos to those who don't revel in it.
your strength has been missed lovely one xo
your strength has been missed lovely one xo
8th Jul 2014 10:06am
8th Jul 2014 9:03am
Beautiful flow as ever unveiled Crim - all below is just the slough of despond - nothing but the flow waiting to flow again - so here's to your flow and so and so
8th Jul 2014 10:07am
8th Jul 2014 9:53am
Bonnie Lass, your soul may be, "but meat for the beast."
Tis on your strong spirit you must depend.
Ability to prevail contained therein.
Incredible realism sensed deeply.
Hugs,
Chad
Tis on your strong spirit you must depend.
Ability to prevail contained therein.
Incredible realism sensed deeply.
Hugs,
Chad
8th Jul 2014 10:08am
thank you Chad for the sound wisdom and for the hugs :) hugs you back.. with love Brenda
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9th Jul 2014 1:13am
My words are speechless here tonight. I so felt this. You're always amazing. Luv and hugs xo :)
9th Jul 2014 1:45am
thank you so graciously beautiful heart.. your tenderness touches me deeply love and hugs Crim :)
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10th Jul 2014 00:59am
A gentleman named Henry once said "Chaos often breeds life", and in this piece you have created was astonishing Crim, an amazing write.... with much respect~Jess
16th Nov 2014 6:14pm
10th Jul 2014 10:50pm
Powerful inking, dripping with affliction. Much love your poetic rawness. :)
16th Nov 2014 6:15pm
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16th Nov 2014 6:48pm
A very intense ink this poem is. So chaotic, yet gifting to this dark image. Saving this on my reading list.
16th Nov 2014 7:07pm
