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Titillation
She slips quietly through the pulsing room
Catching eyes with her graceful moves
Curves hidden behind strips of black
The rest of her veiled in diaphanous fabric
Inviting the mind and eyes to lick
Whispering promises and tribal tattoos on her back
written on virgin like flesh of palest white
With raven locks and plump biteable pink lips
Sable, passionate eyes, deep and blazing; a tempting sorceress.
Her inner goddess coursing through her veins, swaying hips
The heated need inspired sweetly torturous
Upon the stage now, her moves practiced and sensuous
Smooth and intoxicating like aged scotch in jeweled glasses
She commands attention of the men, in strobe light flashes
Teasing glimpses of her peaks and valleys
They imagine soft lips clinging like night webs of gossamer
and sex; sultry and hot like dusk in June's midsummer
Her writhing body casting a spell, this fiery cummer.
She performs her task well, bringing them in hard
and ready with bulging pockets, their money less likely to guard.
She collects their crisp offerings as the music ends,
and wickedly smiles into eyes craving more; her intimate sins.
She licks her lips knowing, soon her private dances begin.
Catching eyes with her graceful moves
Curves hidden behind strips of black
The rest of her veiled in diaphanous fabric
Inviting the mind and eyes to lick
Whispering promises and tribal tattoos on her back
written on virgin like flesh of palest white
With raven locks and plump biteable pink lips
Sable, passionate eyes, deep and blazing; a tempting sorceress.
Her inner goddess coursing through her veins, swaying hips
The heated need inspired sweetly torturous
Upon the stage now, her moves practiced and sensuous
Smooth and intoxicating like aged scotch in jeweled glasses
She commands attention of the men, in strobe light flashes
Teasing glimpses of her peaks and valleys
They imagine soft lips clinging like night webs of gossamer
and sex; sultry and hot like dusk in June's midsummer
Her writhing body casting a spell, this fiery cummer.
She performs her task well, bringing them in hard
and ready with bulging pockets, their money less likely to guard.
She collects their crisp offerings as the music ends,
and wickedly smiles into eyes craving more; her intimate sins.
She licks her lips knowing, soon her private dances begin.
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Re: Titillation
this would be such a great accompanying piece for AwakenedSoul's "strobes of damnation"... it has the same dark wave-rivethead-bdsm vibe to it and i love it!
the only gripe i have is with "Her inner goddess"... (before anyone bites my head off, it's just personal taste )... that phrase was completely abused in the fifty shades series (don't read the books, it'll put you off sex forever)
anyhoo... i really loved this seductive dance, beautiful domore xo
the only gripe i have is with "Her inner goddess"... (before anyone bites my head off, it's just personal taste )... that phrase was completely abused in the fifty shades series (don't read the books, it'll put you off sex forever)
anyhoo... i really loved this seductive dance, beautiful domore xo
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7th Jul 2014 7:33pm
Beautiful kat.. (excuse the language) Holy Shit!! to have this even mentioned in same sentence as "strobes of damnation" is an honor.. you are too kind dear friend :) I am soo glad you enjoyed this.. even with the "goddess" reference.. LOL thank you, for you, and your words that always move me. with love and respect..xoxo domore
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I really enjoyed this and I agree it would be enhanced if it was read aloud with the right piece of music in the background
Excellent writing
Excellent writing
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7th Jul 2014 7:39pm
thank you kindly firemonkey :) I have yet to record one of mine..read aloud..and post/add spoken word video .. definetly a thought with such kind comments as yours.. :) thank you for the read.. with respect..domore
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7th Jul 2014 8:50pm
Thank you dear Jack.. your comment moves me.. makes me smile. I may be just one of many lights here on DUP.. that twinkle and shine from time to time with writes that please..but your comments leaves me feeling as a flame burning brightly for all to see.. your comments the fuel for making fire last. So very kind you are. I am thrilled that this has found a home within your RL.. with much respect..domore
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7th Jul 2014 4:22pm
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7th Jul 2014 8:54pm
Thank you dear friend :) The Lovely Crim.. your comments always supportive.. you give of yourself in reading and commenting, and I am most grateful that you do this for me and many others here on DUP. sending hugs.. with love and respect.. xoxo domore
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7th Jul 2014 6:14pm
"Private Dancer, a dancer for money
doing what you want her to do
Private dancer, any ole music will do..."
(or something like that lol)
Performed by Tina "Anna Mae" Turner...lol
Very steamy spillage my dear! :)
doing what you want her to do
Private dancer, any ole music will do..."
(or something like that lol)
Performed by Tina "Anna Mae" Turner...lol
Very steamy spillage my dear! :)
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7th Jul 2014 8:56pm
Thank you Poe.. LOL I actually thought about that song as I wrote the last line.. LOL So glad you enjoyed this spillage my friend.. xoxo domore
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Playful piece this is, had me grooving to sultry sounds. Something magical about this....the taste it leaves in my mouth, the sinful smile it gives me....I just like someone who understands who they are, which is amazing. Excellent write Domore
FYI I agree with Shadoe...it is a leading edge to Strobes of Damnation, appreciate you Shadoe, I myself did not consider the blend, and I am most honored that you even uttered a title of mine.
FYI I agree with Shadoe...it is a leading edge to Strobes of Damnation, appreciate you Shadoe, I myself did not consider the blend, and I am most honored that you even uttered a title of mine.
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7th Jul 2014 11:47pm
Sweet Awakened.. I am thankful for the read and tantalizing comments :) I am very pleased that this offers you a sinful smile upon your face.. with eyes downcast..in deepest respect.. domore
ps.. my many thanks for seeing this as the Beautiful kat does..I am near speechless
ps.. my many thanks for seeing this as the Beautiful kat does..I am near speechless
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Mmm, dearest lady.
This confession I must make, having read this incredible write three times, yet unable to go further than, "a tempting sorceress."
I promise to return, edit and add to this comment in the near future.
Casting large denominations at your feet. :) xo
Edit:
Hmm, a collection of many 'private' thoughts and images now permanently reside in prime real estate of my prefrontal cortex. They may forever remain, never shared, save only this, "You amaze me!"
I stand and applaud!
This confession I must make, having read this incredible write three times, yet unable to go further than, "a tempting sorceress."
I promise to return, edit and add to this comment in the near future.
Casting large denominations at your feet. :) xo
Edit:
Hmm, a collection of many 'private' thoughts and images now permanently reside in prime real estate of my prefrontal cortex. They may forever remain, never shared, save only this, "You amaze me!"
I stand and applaud!
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LOL confession heard.. wonder what your penance shall have to be.. LOL thank you for the read or three.. your comments brings a smile to my face annnnnd much need funds since I've given ya all of my big bills :) with much love and respect..xoxo domore
ps.. that this finds a home within the halls of your RL is an honor and a privilege dear one :)
ps.. that this finds a home within the halls of your RL is an honor and a privilege dear one :)
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8th Jul 2014 8:05pm
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8th Jul 2014 8:18pm
man of his word.. I had no doubts!! mmmm mmmm mmm Thank you for your kind revision.. I am lost in my own thoughts now.. LOL as I cursty to your lovely applause :) xoxo
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9th Jul 2014 1:23am
Um.....ya.....Sweet Friend......you among others here are bound to give me a stroke reading your erotica. LOL!!! Luv this heated sexy write. Xo :)
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9th Jul 2014 3:23pm
LOL Lovely flower.. no need for a stroke.. wait.. maybe there is?????... LOL kidding!! Sooo happy you liked this.. it was a pleasure to write :) sending hugs my friend.. xoxo domore