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Think of Me
Would you think any less of me,
If i cut myself tonight?
What would you think of me,
if i cut myself and died?
I would go and die tonight,
But i haven't felt your touch,
Yes i would die tonight,
But i haven't done enough.
So tonight when i go home,
i will not cut myself,
Instead i'll take the pain,
of being alone,
like the man i want to be....
If i cut myself tonight?
What would you think of me,
if i cut myself and died?
I would go and die tonight,
But i haven't felt your touch,
Yes i would die tonight,
But i haven't done enough.
So tonight when i go home,
i will not cut myself,
Instead i'll take the pain,
of being alone,
like the man i want to be....
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1st Apr 2011 9:01pm
you've read my every-night thoughts and compiled them perfectly in this poem. It's amazing.
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I like
2nd Apr 2011 5:01am
I very much enjoy this. Well put.I like that it is short but still takes you on a journey.
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re: I like
8th Apr 2011 5:00pm
awesome
2nd Apr 2011 2:52pm
kinda goin through that right now. my gf just dumped me and i'm in the military and just left for Spain 3 days after she did this. the hardest pain isn't the amount of cutting or burning, but the pain of being alone
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re: awesome
8th Apr 2011 5:01pm
:o
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2nd Apr 2011 5:50pm
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thik of me
3rd Apr 2011 9:13am
this is really good benji its kinda eeerrii how you captured the raw emotion .
well done
well done
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hey you!
4th Apr 2011 3:00am
hey! it's madison! i found you :P but don't tell my bro that i have this
And i love that
And i love that
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re: hey you!
8th Apr 2011 5:02pm
great poem
22nd May 2011 9:15pm