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Bliss
I want you to take charge tonight
Master me
Make my pussy spasm at your command
Show me the edge of control
The fine line between exquisite pleasure and excruciating pain
Is there a line?
Can both occur simultaneously?
Teach me what my body will do with you in command
Careful!
Give me too much leeway and I'll turn the tables on you
Swallow you down
Bring you bliss with my mouth
Taunt you with
My
Teeth
Shatter you with my tongue
Wrapped round your dick
Luxuriously
Trust me
If you use my mouth, I'll take control
Wrest it from you
Effortlessly
Yet...
I want you to take control tonight
Master me
Hurt me
Make my pussy weep honey for you
Juices covering my inner thighs
Musky scent of me permeating the air
Show me that fine edge of control
Make me question the boundaries between pain and pleasure
Sublime agony
Excruciating ecstasy
Absolute bliss
Uh oh
As evocative as this is
As sexy as it might be
As blistering hot
i've done it
Again
Haven't i,
Master?
Topping from the bottom.
(and my bottom's getting ready to feel it, i know - i'm not really trying to hide that sheepish, little grin from You) Please forgive my trembling enthusiasm veritably anticipating Your every verbal (and otherwise) instruction.
It is a splendid thing, indeed, that You cherish such a sassy, wicked creature as i. You say it's fitting that this firecracker screams in ecstasy so near this holiday. Fitting punishment for one so brazen. Perhaps, You'll put her up to the balcony windows, make her writhe her jerking, throbbing bliss up against the glass...
Oh!
That's me
Cumming and cumming and cumming again
Oh yes
There
Ahhhhhhh
Cumming again?
Screaming now
No words
Just incoherent, inchoate sound
Tremulous, gasping moans
Desperate wailing pleas
(please)
i gasp out, "can't cum again, Sir."
Implacable You command, "You will."
Master me
Make my pussy spasm at your command
Show me the edge of control
The fine line between exquisite pleasure and excruciating pain
Is there a line?
Can both occur simultaneously?
Teach me what my body will do with you in command
Careful!
Give me too much leeway and I'll turn the tables on you
Swallow you down
Bring you bliss with my mouth
Taunt you with
My
Teeth
Shatter you with my tongue
Wrapped round your dick
Luxuriously
Trust me
If you use my mouth, I'll take control
Wrest it from you
Effortlessly
Yet...
I want you to take control tonight
Master me
Hurt me
Make my pussy weep honey for you
Juices covering my inner thighs
Musky scent of me permeating the air
Show me that fine edge of control
Make me question the boundaries between pain and pleasure
Sublime agony
Excruciating ecstasy
Absolute bliss
Uh oh
As evocative as this is
As sexy as it might be
As blistering hot
i've done it
Again
Haven't i,
Master?
Topping from the bottom.
(and my bottom's getting ready to feel it, i know - i'm not really trying to hide that sheepish, little grin from You) Please forgive my trembling enthusiasm veritably anticipating Your every verbal (and otherwise) instruction.
It is a splendid thing, indeed, that You cherish such a sassy, wicked creature as i. You say it's fitting that this firecracker screams in ecstasy so near this holiday. Fitting punishment for one so brazen. Perhaps, You'll put her up to the balcony windows, make her writhe her jerking, throbbing bliss up against the glass...
Oh!
That's me
Cumming and cumming and cumming again
Oh yes
There
Ahhhhhhh
Cumming again?
Screaming now
No words
Just incoherent, inchoate sound
Tremulous, gasping moans
Desperate wailing pleas
(please)
i gasp out, "can't cum again, Sir."
Implacable You command, "You will."
Published 3rd Jul 2014
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3rd Jul 2014 9:50pm
Outstanding ...
The best part of sexual pain is when you recognize how much you love it, that little window of joy, where there is the high and cumming is almost an after thought, ya dig ?
The best part of sexual pain is when you recognize how much you love it, that little window of joy, where there is the high and cumming is almost an after thought, ya dig ?
4th Jul 2014 8:46am
Thank you, PoetSpeak, for such high praise indeed! :-* I am honored. Ironically enough, I'm a sub who's never been allowed to sub. I'm a good enough switch, apparently, that I've always topped because everyone's always requested that of me - okay, demanded. :-D I am definitely a sub, though...
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2014 11:18pm
Nice work.
"Make my pussy weep honey for you" I especially liked.... because duh.
Last verse with the "wailing pleas" and "(please)" was fun to read and the last two lines obviously were tip top
"Make my pussy weep honey for you" I especially liked.... because duh.
Last verse with the "wailing pleas" and "(please)" was fun to read and the last two lines obviously were tip top
Thank you, JT (SugarSkull). What did you really want to call yourself anyway? (I read your intro when I went and did mine)
Sometimes the way you phrase things charms me...because duh. :-* I do rather adore that you thought anything I wrote was obviously tip-top, luv. Your saying that was hugely gratifying! (So much so, I might now be adding those final lines to absolutely everything.) I can dream, can't I? :-p
Sometimes the way you phrase things charms me...because duh. :-* I do rather adore that you thought anything I wrote was obviously tip-top, luv. Your saying that was hugely gratifying! (So much so, I might now be adding those final lines to absolutely everything.) I can dream, can't I? :-p
4th Jul 2014 1:28am
I'm with JT, that pussy weeping honey
Is a fucking brilliant line! Mmmmmm such a yummy mind you have lady, coupled with an apparent hot n
willing body, can't imagine NOT wanting to enjoy every inch lol
Is a fucking brilliant line! Mmmmmm such a yummy mind you have lady, coupled with an apparent hot n
willing body, can't imagine NOT wanting to enjoy every inch lol
Ah, Poetikmind, you dangerously seductive male luring me with references to fucking and brilliance in the same sentence! Then, you have the sheer audacity to pair that with allusions to my yummy mind and apparent hotness; how oh how can I resist you? I see through you, you know. Next, you'll be writing some tantalizing bit of poetry that will devastate the senses, demolish any resistance with sheer sensuality. I'm on to you, you erotic ninja...
Thank you for your lovely words celebrating my poetry, Poetikmind. :-*
Thank you for your lovely words celebrating my poetry, Poetikmind. :-*
4th Jul 2014 2:12pm
suffering is wantonly a great cause for delayed sexual orgasm in females all males just simply ejaculate but have to wait till the gals valley is draining as you say honey mixed with lemon juice men just want to fountain every moment if they could but that no woman would I see my name being used again and again you are a class poet says again and as u r sufficiently intelligent practice more and quicker release with poetry in a smaller piece all will love to devour
thank you so much for your such a lovely comment I don't write my brain and compy combine and you know how that does my erotica define all love mine ere it does rise and all are wantonly surprised how again and again A G A I N does rise tis any one's surmise
the morning wood says
cummming again
and again this again!
thank you so much for your such a lovely comment I don't write my brain and compy combine and you know how that does my erotica define all love mine ere it does rise and all are wantonly surprised how again and again A G A I N does rise tis any one's surmise
the morning wood says
cummming again
and again this again!
Ah, again. The convolutions of your mind and the meager ability of mine own to comprehend...
I begin to ascertain that your responses always appear to be in ode form, which is quite a feat and tribute altogether. This, in part, is what makes them, then (for me) such a challenge to decipher.
Perhaps, a quick release is soothing to some
I say, let's wait
And wait (feel the heat)
Just wait some more
The build-up's part of what makes
the finish explosive at the core
Some poetry is meant to finish quickly and with a burst:
I find myself obsessing over you
Clenching each time I envision you in my mouth
Other poetry is longer, more luxurious:
Seven
I, quite frankly, lust for your body
My pussy is greedy to feel your cock embedded inside
There is an ongoing war between my mouth and my pussy
Some envy there
When you are in one
The other desires your
Presence
I fear the left-out orifice experiences wrath
I am a glutton for you
For your attentions
I feel no shame in admitting this
Indeed, I am abandoned in my ardor for you
So much so that when we are satiated, replete at last
I collapse in utter sloth
Reposing like Sleeping Beauty
Until your return...
You are welcome for my comment. I meant it. Write on, bold poet! :-*
I begin to ascertain that your responses always appear to be in ode form, which is quite a feat and tribute altogether. This, in part, is what makes them, then (for me) such a challenge to decipher.
Perhaps, a quick release is soothing to some
I say, let's wait
And wait (feel the heat)
Just wait some more
The build-up's part of what makes
the finish explosive at the core
Some poetry is meant to finish quickly and with a burst:
I find myself obsessing over you
Clenching each time I envision you in my mouth
Other poetry is longer, more luxurious:
Seven
I, quite frankly, lust for your body
My pussy is greedy to feel your cock embedded inside
There is an ongoing war between my mouth and my pussy
Some envy there
When you are in one
The other desires your
Presence
I fear the left-out orifice experiences wrath
I am a glutton for you
For your attentions
I feel no shame in admitting this
Indeed, I am abandoned in my ardor for you
So much so that when we are satiated, replete at last
I collapse in utter sloth
Reposing like Sleeping Beauty
Until your return...
You are welcome for my comment. I meant it. Write on, bold poet! :-*
5th Jul 2014 4:34am
I am just an actor of poetry
don't lust for me
an old story
like old wine in newer modern bottles
all shaken up with juices and white creamy milk
my longish
now dying one shall perish
in the mouth you want
so be safer in the hands
of harder onnnnns
unger ones
I only sell poetic erotica
hope your pussies are satisfied
as you with some one
or even alone ride
let thoughts about me subside
I only erotica
subscribe
prescribe!!!!!!
don't lust for me
an old story
like old wine in newer modern bottles
all shaken up with juices and white creamy milk
my longish
now dying one shall perish
in the mouth you want
so be safer in the hands
of harder onnnnns
unger ones
I only sell poetic erotica
hope your pussies are satisfied
as you with some one
or even alone ride
let thoughts about me subside
I only erotica
subscribe
prescribe!!!!!!
5th Jul 2014 4:47am
Again, how gently you set me adrift. I see you are immune to my charms. :-*
I languish.
(Thank you for the delightful verbal repartee, luv. :-*)
I languish.
(Thank you for the delightful verbal repartee, luv. :-*)
I am immune to lust
an old fossil of love
hence decayed
go find a newer one
being birthed
u have a long way
a deeper mind
the monkeys say
let's just play
as sex can't betray
we may
tc lovely poetess of erotica
I am too distant
too far a composer at par
but not equal to you
hope u will partake with others near you
I am internet's away
hence can't towards anyone stray
have a good day
keep at it
as a harp within you u
you do ply
iiiiiii pray!
an old fossil of love
hence decayed
go find a newer one
being birthed
u have a long way
a deeper mind
the monkeys say
let's just play
as sex can't betray
we may
tc lovely poetess of erotica
I am too distant
too far a composer at par
but not equal to you
hope u will partake with others near you
I am internet's away
hence can't towards anyone stray
have a good day
keep at it
as a harp within you u
you do ply
iiiiiii pray!
5th Jul 2014 5:07am
Again, I assure you, you need not worry on this score. Although I do see now how I might have conveyed the impression of unrequited lust, I was merely pulling poetry I'd utilized in two of the site competitions to demonstrate two styles.
Woe unto me that both examples were, of course, filled with explicit sexual yearning as usual. :-p In this incarnation, apparently, my bane. I apologize for giving you the impression I was pursuing you.
Let me set the record unalterably straight: I am pursuing no one. I am engaging in some lovely flirtation, an incredible art form all its own, especially when combined with poetry. In fact, the modern era is missing out on an immense amount of sheer enjoyment by not continuing the long tradition of courtly flirtation and poetry to my mind.
Rest easy, again.
Woe unto me that both examples were, of course, filled with explicit sexual yearning as usual. :-p In this incarnation, apparently, my bane. I apologize for giving you the impression I was pursuing you.
Let me set the record unalterably straight: I am pursuing no one. I am engaging in some lovely flirtation, an incredible art form all its own, especially when combined with poetry. In fact, the modern era is missing out on an immense amount of sheer enjoyment by not continuing the long tradition of courtly flirtation and poetry to my mind.
Rest easy, again.
6th Jul 2014 1:04am
AS I am an actor of poetry
I know and am rested
ur good erotically sensibly
take ittttttttt
I know and am rested
ur good erotically sensibly
take ittttttttt
Anonymous
4th Jul 2014 10:46pm
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Jack-Tex, I think I've made my predilections quite clear as far as the allure men hold in terms of magical elixirs.
As far as aroma is concerned, my knees fair weaken when exposed to that heady masculine spice you men exude! So, speak not to me of fairness, luv. :-p
I love that you find my style deliciously and scrumptiously uplifting. (I'm starting to feel rather delectably edible here. ;-))
Perfect, eh? That's tough, luv! How do I surpass that?! I'd better take ALL the points then. :-p No. No. I can't do that. Such high praise is heady like fine wine. Thank you for the honor. :-*
You are an incredibly insightful, sexy man. I find your mind an aphrodisiac.
I want to kiss something...
Ah, you Devil, you know me already. Commanding, i yield. Take me.
As far as aroma is concerned, my knees fair weaken when exposed to that heady masculine spice you men exude! So, speak not to me of fairness, luv. :-p
I love that you find my style deliciously and scrumptiously uplifting. (I'm starting to feel rather delectably edible here. ;-))
Perfect, eh? That's tough, luv! How do I surpass that?! I'd better take ALL the points then. :-p No. No. I can't do that. Such high praise is heady like fine wine. Thank you for the honor. :-*
You are an incredibly insightful, sexy man. I find your mind an aphrodisiac.
I want to kiss something...
Ah, you Devil, you know me already. Commanding, i yield. Take me.
