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Say My Fucking Name
Cappuccino melting into caramel
In our ever burning desire
To taste one another
On fevered lips
As though paralyzed
You give in to my fantasy
Begging for release
Crazed, moaning to be freed
From invisible tethers
With which you are bound
Teasing you
Drawing you in with eagerness
Drenched in a need
To sate my own desires
But the sound waves
Of your moans
Keep me going
As if to suck out
Your very soul
Or just drive you mad
In every change of pace
Tongue, and lips
Then to straddle you
Rewarding your patience
So hot... so tight... so wet
Hips rolling like I hear music
Dancing in steady rhythm
Lips at your neck
Placing my mark
For all to see
"MINE!"
And I whisper
With ecstasy in my voice
To flip me and claim me
If you can break the spell
I feel this may be in need of some editing, but this is my first somewhat successful attempt at getting this out. Don't throw tomatoes at me :)
In our ever burning desire
To taste one another
On fevered lips
As though paralyzed
You give in to my fantasy
Begging for release
Crazed, moaning to be freed
From invisible tethers
With which you are bound
Teasing you
Drawing you in with eagerness
Drenched in a need
To sate my own desires
But the sound waves
Of your moans
Keep me going
As if to suck out
Your very soul
Or just drive you mad
In every change of pace
Tongue, and lips
Then to straddle you
Rewarding your patience
So hot... so tight... so wet
Hips rolling like I hear music
Dancing in steady rhythm
Lips at your neck
Placing my mark
For all to see
"MINE!"
And I whisper
With ecstasy in my voice
To flip me and claim me
If you can break the spell
I feel this may be in need of some editing, but this is my first somewhat successful attempt at getting this out. Don't throw tomatoes at me :)
Published 3rd Jul 2014
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3rd Jul 2014 7:11am
I feel as though it needs more added to it. Like it's still leading up to something, otherwise I liked what there is of it alot.
- Paige Rider.
- Paige Rider.
3rd Jul 2014 11:06am
3rd Jul 2014 5:03pm
Vivid imagery you have created, it awakened many senses. Much impressive write, felt the seduction and the need, bravo.
4th Jul 2014 00:41am
