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kill em all
like the birdie that lands on the branch
like the sun that shines in the sky
or the child that loves it's mother
everything so soft,so sweet,so real
like the bully who pushes you around
like the boss that squeezes so tight
like the one who hates the other
everything so hard,so bitter,so real
like the father who beats his son
like the killer who kills for fun
or the king who kills everyone
everything's so strange,so painful,so real.
like the sun that shines in the sky
or the child that loves it's mother
everything so soft,so sweet,so real
like the bully who pushes you around
like the boss that squeezes so tight
like the one who hates the other
everything so hard,so bitter,so real
like the father who beats his son
like the killer who kills for fun
or the king who kills everyone
everything's so strange,so painful,so real.
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Re: kill em all
2nd Jul 2014 1:05am
It's bitter as a lemon, life,
for all the sugar one adds
to make it palatable...
but what else can we do,
if eat it we must
sugarcoat it...
nice, Hash...
for all the sugar one adds
to make it palatable...
but what else can we do,
if eat it we must
sugarcoat it...
nice, Hash...
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re: Re: kill em all
2nd Jul 2014 1:12am
Re: kill em all
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2014 2:05am
Wow! You write with power and straight out thoughts. Enjoyed it! Xo :)
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re: Re: kill em all
3rd Jul 2014 00:57am
Re: kill em all
2nd Jul 2014 2:30am
Hashman, the world is made of such...and will stay on being like that. Good read! :)
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re: Re: kill em all
3rd Jul 2014 00:59am
Re: kill em all
2nd Jul 2014 3:00am
That's the weight of the world right there Hash-Heavy
Excellent Ink Sir!!!
Excellent Ink Sir!!!
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re: Re: kill em all
3rd Jul 2014 1:01am
Re: kill em all
2nd Jul 2014 5:01am
I'm right with you Brother Hash. Keep asking the question and few answers we haven't heard might pop up. All power my friend. :)
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re: Re: kill em all
3rd Jul 2014 1:02am
Re: kill em all
2nd Jul 2014 6:04am
Re: kill em all
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2014 12:04pm
this is different... I like it a lot
nice work my friend..haunting and sorta crazy :)
nice work my friend..haunting and sorta crazy :)
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re: Re: kill em all
3rd Jul 2014 10:49pm
Re: kill em all
19th Jul 2014 10:24pm
Deep thoughts. I've experienced this frame of mind before but morality always buts in. Enjoyed.
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