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Summer Embrace
Lovers
Park bench
Secluded
You in your summery dress
Me in my softest cotton shirt
My lips on yours
First gentle
Then insistent
Tongues colliding
Passion in the trees
Shielding us from danger
This dance may never happen again
Savor me
As I devour your need
One kiss at a time ....
Park bench
Secluded
You in your summery dress
Me in my softest cotton shirt
My lips on yours
First gentle
Then insistent
Tongues colliding
Passion in the trees
Shielding us from danger
This dance may never happen again
Savor me
As I devour your need
One kiss at a time ....
Published 1st Jul 2014
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2014 7:04pm
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1st Jul 2014 9:02pm
Give Janis a piece of mt heart please....
thx for your comments. Its just another love poem. For some reason these are super easy to write. I guess my inspiration has been outstanding over the years.
thx for your comments. Its just another love poem. For some reason these are super easy to write. I guess my inspiration has been outstanding over the years.
1st Jul 2014 7:38pm
1st Jul 2014 9:03pm
1st Jul 2014 9:44pm
its not just another love poem Poet....
don't sell yourself short....
then as a lover of your words, i may be biased... :)
thank god for your many years of inspiration.....
xx
don't sell yourself short....
then as a lover of your words, i may be biased... :)
thank god for your many years of inspiration.....
xx
1st Jul 2014 9:48pm
Thx Kate
I'm must a romantic on what could be for universal lovers
Appreciate your kind words :)
I'm must a romantic on what could be for universal lovers
Appreciate your kind words :)
2nd Jul 2014 00:47am
2nd Jul 2014 1:55am
2nd Jul 2014 1:15am
Your description of this moment allows me to feel and picture it perfectly. Romantic and lovely.
2nd Jul 2014 1:56am
2nd Jul 2014 3:40am
Sexy write for sure. Get most of inspiration from things in nature. Beautiful! Enjoyed! Xo :)
2nd Jul 2014 4:07am
2nd Jul 2014 7:48am
2nd Jul 2014 11:37am
Thx Glass
For your kind words and RL add
I could see you in this place, romantic that you are ....
xx
For your kind words and RL add
I could see you in this place, romantic that you are ....
xx
2nd Jul 2014 12:05pm
Central Park? ... or Riverside? Both offer great little coves for these moments.
There's a great feeling of contentment in this ink.
There's a great feeling of contentment in this ink.
2nd Jul 2014 12:54pm
2nd Jul 2014 3:44pm
I know it well ... In fact I just had dinner with my Lena at this little Italian place on Lasalle ... Pisticci
2nd Jul 2014 12:59pm
Well...let the first kiss ensue!! :) Enjoyed this piece...visually works you up to a point where imaginations can thoroughly run...or walk if needed lol
2nd Jul 2014 1:05pm
2nd Jul 2014 7:58pm
2nd Jul 2014 8:10pm
I love this! makes me want to go to a park, find the perfect bench and guy and make out! :)
2nd Jul 2014 8:45pm
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2014 10:32pm
I love that you described this moment with such grace.
3rd Jul 2014 10:51pm
7th Jul 2014 5:29am
Mmmmmm....so descriptive. Makes me long to taste a certain pair of warm, moist lips. Love it hun
Xoxoxo
Belle
Xoxoxo
Belle
7th Jul 2014 1:22pm
This is the writing I'm best at, warmth and sensual thoughts. The rest is fun and power driven but I think my craft is here, or so the feedback indicates.
Thx
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Thx
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10th Oct 2023 4:46pm
10th Oct 2023 4:49pm
Thanks so much for going back in my beginnings of poetry writing.
I really appreciate it !
I really appreciate it !
10th Oct 2023 4:51pm
10th Oct 2023 5:24pm
Thank you Bat
I was a better writer back then when I was writing impulses. It's fun to look back ...
I was a better writer back then when I was writing impulses. It's fun to look back ...
