Heating Water

HOLY goodness! This is HOTT!! Outstanding imagery
in this piece! :)

Thank you, Poetikmind! I wanted to bring the heat, swelter in it. ;-)

i may never drink hot chocolate with a straight face again.
this was truly a decadent read :) welcome to DU

Thank you, winter (_shadoe_). If there's not at least a wee bit of wickedness going on in your head when you're drinking hot chocolate, your hot chocolate isn't good enough... ;-) I am glad you found the poem decadent. Erotica should be rather luscious and evocative, ne c'est pas? Again, thank you for the welcome.

Ooooooo! Brilliant sexy write. Really enjoyed this tasty treat. :)

Thank you, flowergirl. :-* I'm glad it satisfied...

"I could
  lean over him
  let my warmth
               wetness
  disturb him awake
or remain
tempting myself with
provocative thoughts
              of this
innocent bittersweet invitation."<--Damn! That was sexy as hell!
I'd wake his ass quick, fast and in a hurry; but that's just me. ;)

That definitely works as well!
 
You know it all depends on the moment, girl!

Thank you, RainC, luv! :-*

I love the alluring imagery in this piece. The preparation of the chocolate is beautiful.

Thank you very much, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-*!

I do love preparing food and drink; the kitchen is very special to me. :-*

Hello S  
 
The opening stanza intrigues me, I think I like the use of adjectives in it. I found it beautifully de-script from the first word. The thoughts of a restrained glaze and simmering stare are mouth watering.  
 
The eluded submissive self that filters through the sleek clean second stanza is a feast for the brain and the ability to create the imagery of bedtime lingering with out saying so, is well masterful.  
 
I got a little lost between the bed sheets and the kitchen, it was like a sudden movement for me. I'd have liked to finish the bed sheet poem first. Or maybe moved between the bedroom and kitchen slower or with an little typical push, trip and stumble... maybe?  
 
Never the less the Kitchen imagery excites and delivers what it promises, her need to melt that chocolate perfectly is evident and well nicely written. Brings a smile to the heart.  
 
The smile to the face is the humorous ending penned skilfully so as to keep it's sexy yet show the irony of the moment.  
 
Then the knock out closer is well a crescendo!  
That word innocent made me giggle, intensely.  
 
Excuse me visiting so late, just found some inspiration -smiles-  
 
Al -x-

Ah, luv, you know, you are absolutely correct about this poem on many levels.

First, I must say that this and Poetry are quite ancient, written when I was much younger. ;-p

I've never gone back and edited; I almost never do - not because I think I'm so good, rather because they come out the way they do and I cannot successfully envision them otherwise. Tis a flaw in me, I know.

However, as you point out that sudden shift betwixt bedroom and kitchen, I see precisely what you indicate. Tis scintillatingly clear. I'll toy with this a bit and see... :-* Thank you for this insight.

No excusings necessary, luv, whatsoever. I am most blessed by YOUR visitation, luv. You are kind and gracious to do so. I rather begin to adore you. :-*

Aww, Savaja, this is all sultry you! :)

Loved the thoroughly vivid visual display in this. Each line delivering a sensual message before the next with anticipation.
Great stuff.