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when will life end
How long do I have to stay in this world?
Day after day, I want to leave it all behind
To just give up on life
Leaving means, saying goodbye
To those I love
I could pretend it was an accident
That my thin cold knife, went too deep
No one would ever know
I could escape life
Do I really want to die?
Give up everything I have?
Its my decision, no one's else
No one can take my gift away
That will get me to freedom
I will end my life today
And forever I will be free
From the hell I live in
Day after day, I want to leave it all behind
To just give up on life
Leaving means, saying goodbye
To those I love
I could pretend it was an accident
That my thin cold knife, went too deep
No one would ever know
I could escape life
Do I really want to die?
Give up everything I have?
Its my decision, no one's else
No one can take my gift away
That will get me to freedom
I will end my life today
And forever I will be free
From the hell I live in
Published 29th Jun 2014
| Edited 7th Jul 2014
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29th Jun 2014 4:11am
29th Jun 2014 8:17am
30th Jun 2014 5:34am
Good poem. Only one problem, you used to wrong kind of 'to'. On "went to deep" it should be too. Sorry, this is one thing that bothers my OCD. But really good poem!!!!!!
30th Jun 2014 6:57am
Thank you so Much Rhiannon:)!! And thanks for letting me know. I will fix that:)
