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Lingering Death
Don't even bother asking why
Bow your head a scream a sigh
Far ahead you hear a chime
in your head you do realize
That it is the time
that you must die
Roots cover this sacred path
Underneath your feet you pass
Onward towards hell you go at last
Your sins and lies you do caress
you have failed the holy test
Cold frost of winter you crave
Summer's warmth you did not save
You love the cold embrace
A darkest desire that burns with fire
Perverted mind devoid of shame
Into darkness you finally fade
Walls of black pitch surround your fate
For you salvation came too late
Bow your head a scream a sigh
Far ahead you hear a chime
in your head you do realize
That it is the time
that you must die
Roots cover this sacred path
Underneath your feet you pass
Onward towards hell you go at last
Your sins and lies you do caress
you have failed the holy test
Cold frost of winter you crave
Summer's warmth you did not save
You love the cold embrace
A darkest desire that burns with fire
Perverted mind devoid of shame
Into darkness you finally fade
Walls of black pitch surround your fate
For you salvation came too late
Published 26th Jun 2014
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27th Jun 2014 10:56am
27th Jun 2014 2:25pm
6th Jul 2014 12:58pm
Hello Lastday; hows it goin man... This is great, am glad you found me, otherwise wouldn't have go tto read you man... This is Great friend,
The whole piece is really good, Love the subject matter friend... Eternaty is on hand now, judgment is here,
"Your sins and lies you do caress
you have failed the holy test
Cold frost of winter you crave
Summer's warmth you did not save
You love the cold embrace
A darkest desire that burns with fire" Alright, right here man, right there is the cold naked truth, you lay out a holy fire and brimstone sermon, and lay it out in a calming poetry piece, dig that man, dig that VERY Much...
"Perverted mind devoid of shame
Into darkness you finally fade
Walls of black pitch surround your fate
For you salvation came too late" This, this makes it real personal now, it tingles and feels good... a perverted mind, yes, devoid of shame, depends what mood am in, hehehe, into darkness you finally fade, yes, the works of man are wicked, an they prefer the dark, because their deeds are wicked, like that man, had to favorite this poem man, your song her eis very strong, take care my friend: deadwolf
The whole piece is really good, Love the subject matter friend... Eternaty is on hand now, judgment is here,
"Your sins and lies you do caress
you have failed the holy test
Cold frost of winter you crave
Summer's warmth you did not save
You love the cold embrace
A darkest desire that burns with fire" Alright, right here man, right there is the cold naked truth, you lay out a holy fire and brimstone sermon, and lay it out in a calming poetry piece, dig that man, dig that VERY Much...
"Perverted mind devoid of shame
Into darkness you finally fade
Walls of black pitch surround your fate
For you salvation came too late" This, this makes it real personal now, it tingles and feels good... a perverted mind, yes, devoid of shame, depends what mood am in, hehehe, into darkness you finally fade, yes, the works of man are wicked, an they prefer the dark, because their deeds are wicked, like that man, had to favorite this poem man, your song her eis very strong, take care my friend: deadwolf
