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One and one
Soft lips all over my body
My fingernails clawing at your back
Your manhood inside me
Moving and stroking me
Your salty sweat falling on my lips
Mmmmmmmmm
This is what I like baby
Move faster
fill me to my core
Body burning with feelings of orgasm
I'm not ready to release
I want the fill of you
I want My name engraved in your head Before I reach my peak
My pussy is soft wet and tight
It fits secure around your cock
So push in further baby
Make me cum for you
Call my name
Scream my name
We can orgasm together
I'll arch my back and give it to you thrust for thrust
Swallow my cries as we both cum
Cumming so hard were shaking
Are bodies mixed fit like a glove
Where perfectly sated..
My fingernails clawing at your back
Your manhood inside me
Moving and stroking me
Your salty sweat falling on my lips
Mmmmmmmmm
This is what I like baby
Move faster
fill me to my core
Body burning with feelings of orgasm
I'm not ready to release
I want the fill of you
I want My name engraved in your head Before I reach my peak
My pussy is soft wet and tight
It fits secure around your cock
So push in further baby
Make me cum for you
Call my name
Scream my name
We can orgasm together
I'll arch my back and give it to you thrust for thrust
Swallow my cries as we both cum
Cumming so hard were shaking
Are bodies mixed fit like a glove
Where perfectly sated..
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idealistic cum
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30th Mar 2011 3:36pm
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30th Mar 2011 7:05pm
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This one......
30th Mar 2011 4:37pm
is just a little bit different than your others. More intense. More inspired. More idealic. This one feels a lot freer in it's flow. Usually an indicator that the writer was more introspective in approach. Or more autobiographical. This comes at me like you've closed your eyes and replayed the love making over and over in your mind. I love that kind read where I can actually interact and see and feel the writers words. Scrumptious! Like french vanilla ice cream and apple pie.....hott!
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re: This one......
30th Mar 2011 4:40pm
Awe Ty and your right on pint that's exactly how I did it closed my eyes and thought then just wrote it done there's the work Ty again
Beautiful
30th Mar 2011 7:26pm
Beautiful erotica and I love the stanza..I want my name engraved in your head before I peak..again beautiful..peace Crim
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love it
30th Mar 2011 8:39pm
Nice
6th Apr 2011 9:39pm
wow...
15th Jun 2011 10:22pm
I love reading works such as this, pure erotica yet presently with such structure and essence. Beautifully done
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Re: One and one
1st Jun 2012 6:22am