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The Mouth That Leads To Isis
She rules with an iron fist that gives way to a flow of dangerous curves
The Nile weeps between her legs
One who enters in divine caress
Touches planes of immortal behest
Ophelia orders sensuous ordeal of sacred silken steps
Rituals performed in transcendent ornate fashion
Profoundly unraveling details
Made light on the whims of fabled seduction
Within her chambers kissing deeply to reach the Goddess
In surrender of her woven spell
Musical fingers undress realisms' fleece
Emerging naked and fearless in virgin land
Published 27th Mar 2011
| Edited 28th Mar 2011
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27th Mar 2011 10:44pm
28th Mar 2011 00:59am
i agree with Crimsin
such brilliance in words.. a pleasure to read and takes the imagination
xx
such brilliance in words.. a pleasure to read and takes the imagination
xx
Cleopatra was viewed as a reincarnation of Isis
One of her charms that made her perhapse the most legendary seducer of all time was the over the top exotic costumed rituals (parties) she would have for her lovers, it is said that in the intoxication of the evening her victim left reality behind and felt like he was in the realm of gods
One of her charms that made her perhapse the most legendary seducer of all time was the over the top exotic costumed rituals (parties) she would have for her lovers, it is said that in the intoxication of the evening her victim left reality behind and felt like he was in the realm of gods
28th Mar 2011 2:11am
...and then it weakens a bit, only because you go from talking about her to talking about being with her, but the change is too subtle to read smoothly the first time...very pretty language my friend.
28th Mar 2011 2:36am
I changed "my" to "the" not only does the poem flow better as a whole, i think the scenetence is more musical now. thanks for suggestion and read
Anonymous
28th Mar 2011 3:56am
Absolutely stunning. :]
