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WOMAN OF FAITH.
There is something mysterious about a woman whose trust is in the Lord.
She is like an exotic open secret,
Everybody want to get access to
but very few possess the favor to read her.
She is a mighty code,
powerfully encrypted by the Lord.
To crack,you will have to surpass the Father,The Son and the Holy Spirit.
Woman of faith
She is beautiful,outstanding,phenomenal,courageous,a leader and a friend.
She is nominated,appointed and anointed on earth and the heavens above.
She is like an exotic open secret,
Everybody want to get access to
but very few possess the favor to read her.
She is a mighty code,
powerfully encrypted by the Lord.
To crack,you will have to surpass the Father,The Son and the Holy Spirit.
Woman of faith
She is beautiful,outstanding,phenomenal,courageous,a leader and a friend.
She is nominated,appointed and anointed on earth and the heavens above.
Published 12th Jun 2014
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2014 10:19am
A beautiful ode to the female spirit!
13th Jun 2014 7:12am
Hi Mourganna!Good morning!
Thank you for passing by,reading,and for the comment.
Have a beautiful day!!!
Thank you for passing by,reading,and for the comment.
Have a beautiful day!!!
Anonymous
12th Jun 2014 11:33am
The thing I found interesting about this piece is the concept that women of faith are free. In contrast, they are committed to the confines of the teaching of a book.
Somebody told me once that the nature of faith is much like learning to swim. You don't try to grab hold of the water, because if you do, you will sink and drown. Instead, you relax, and you float on the surface. The lesson here is that a person who holds on to faith, who clings to ideas of God and the universe becomes a person who has no faith at all, just a learned set of ideals. They are simply clinging on to the teachings of the bible. Surely the attitude of faith is to accept every possible idea, whatever they may be and learn how to float?
This piece made me think a little. Thank you for the read.
Somebody told me once that the nature of faith is much like learning to swim. You don't try to grab hold of the water, because if you do, you will sink and drown. Instead, you relax, and you float on the surface. The lesson here is that a person who holds on to faith, who clings to ideas of God and the universe becomes a person who has no faith at all, just a learned set of ideals. They are simply clinging on to the teachings of the bible. Surely the attitude of faith is to accept every possible idea, whatever they may be and learn how to float?
This piece made me think a little. Thank you for the read.
Good morning Missy!
I find your comment and argument very interesting,am glad you passed by.
Yes,women of faith confine to the teachings of the Holy Bible,or the Koran or any other Holy Book out there,and it is abiding to those teachings that set them apart from any other woman.
Yes she falls,she dissapoint,she fails,she does sin,but she always rise up because she does not dwell on her weakness but rather on the greatness of her God.And yes,that does set her free from this world.Her goal,her priority is pleasing the Lord,she is not concerned with the needs and desires of the flesh but more with getting it right spiritually which makes her stand out from the crowd!She possess a distinguished aura!!!
Faith is more than learned set of ideas,yes,some people are Christians or Muslims or Buddhist or Jewish or Orthodox e.t.c because they were brought up or are being brought up in families that follow those religions,but for some people,its more than an inherited trait.It is a choice to believe,to trust,to hope in God in good times and bad,when the waters are still and when the ocean tides are threatening to knock them out!
Whhhhoooo!I feel like i have written a composition,haha!!!
Thanks so much for your comment and for passing by!
xoxo!!!
I find your comment and argument very interesting,am glad you passed by.
Yes,women of faith confine to the teachings of the Holy Bible,or the Koran or any other Holy Book out there,and it is abiding to those teachings that set them apart from any other woman.
Yes she falls,she dissapoint,she fails,she does sin,but she always rise up because she does not dwell on her weakness but rather on the greatness of her God.And yes,that does set her free from this world.Her goal,her priority is pleasing the Lord,she is not concerned with the needs and desires of the flesh but more with getting it right spiritually which makes her stand out from the crowd!She possess a distinguished aura!!!
Faith is more than learned set of ideas,yes,some people are Christians or Muslims or Buddhist or Jewish or Orthodox e.t.c because they were brought up or are being brought up in families that follow those religions,but for some people,its more than an inherited trait.It is a choice to believe,to trust,to hope in God in good times and bad,when the waters are still and when the ocean tides are threatening to knock them out!
Whhhhoooo!I feel like i have written a composition,haha!!!
Thanks so much for your comment and for passing by!
xoxo!!!
A man of seeks out this woman
Of faith.
And when he finds her his heart
Sends God many a Praise.
A man of faith who finds a good woman
Follows the instruction of Solomon,
Is gentle when she becomes one with him
Is gentle With and caring and full of grace
He cherishes her as the rich man his diamonds
And thanks the Lord for a wonderful woman
Who fills him with fiery will and passion.
For a woman who would bear his children
This faithful man Unsteeles his heart for this woman
And rushes to her defence, just as she rushes to his
He listens to her wise words, and sleeps only in her bed.
He is humble, gentle, couth, slow to wrath, forgiving.
And knowing that he has a home and woman to return to.
He thanks God for making him complete
Your poem is really great and really puts into words what a faithful woman is. That the type of woman I'd like to marry and so this poem just came up in response to it. This is how I as a man feel about the Woman of Faith. I also see it nearly everyday with my parents who, even though they disagree at time, are what a faithful and righteous man and woman should be. Great poem! Sorry for the long reply.
Of faith.
And when he finds her his heart
Sends God many a Praise.
A man of faith who finds a good woman
Follows the instruction of Solomon,
Is gentle when she becomes one with him
Is gentle With and caring and full of grace
He cherishes her as the rich man his diamonds
And thanks the Lord for a wonderful woman
Who fills him with fiery will and passion.
For a woman who would bear his children
This faithful man Unsteeles his heart for this woman
And rushes to her defence, just as she rushes to his
He listens to her wise words, and sleeps only in her bed.
He is humble, gentle, couth, slow to wrath, forgiving.
And knowing that he has a home and woman to return to.
He thanks God for making him complete
Your poem is really great and really puts into words what a faithful woman is. That the type of woman I'd like to marry and so this poem just came up in response to it. This is how I as a man feel about the Woman of Faith. I also see it nearly everyday with my parents who, even though they disagree at time, are what a faithful and righteous man and woman should be. Great poem! Sorry for the long reply.
13th Jun 2014 7:58am
Wow Joseph!This man of faith sounds like a man that i know and love dearly!
Wow!!!I love every line in this great poem,it totally compliment mine!No!It completes mine!!!
Am glad you have such a lovely and blessed family and parents that are great role models to you.
Someone tells me,a man is worthy two of three things.His name and his word.But he cannot live up to his name and his word without Faith on the only man who is greater than his own father;God.
Am excited for the wonderful man that you are and that you will be to your woman and your kids!Never deviate from that path!
Good luck and thank you so much for the poetic luv!!!
Kisses!!!
And i love that long reply!
Wow!!!I love every line in this great poem,it totally compliment mine!No!It completes mine!!!
Am glad you have such a lovely and blessed family and parents that are great role models to you.
Someone tells me,a man is worthy two of three things.His name and his word.But he cannot live up to his name and his word without Faith on the only man who is greater than his own father;God.
Am excited for the wonderful man that you are and that you will be to your woman and your kids!Never deviate from that path!
Good luck and thank you so much for the poetic luv!!!
Kisses!!!
And i love that long reply!
17th Jun 2014 4:18am
You're welcome. =) God gives the inspiration, and I just let it out. For me, poems come out best that way. Thanks
13th Jun 2014 1:35pm
Like it....
I don't follow a religion per se...as I have an interest in all...
I just have a connection which gives me strength... & I love it. :)
I don't follow a religion per se...as I have an interest in all...
I just have a connection which gives me strength... & I love it. :)
16th Jun 2014 7:43am
15th Jun 2014 9:24am
Echo JJR Kelly - I was about to point to you the woman described in Proverbs 31.
Favourite verse - so many women of faith I have known had the quality described, desirable to know (I mean not in the 'Biblical' sense!) but few get close to:
She is like an exotic open secret,
Everybody want to get access to
but very few possess the favor to read her.
Favourite verse - so many women of faith I have known had the quality described, desirable to know (I mean not in the 'Biblical' sense!) but few get close to:
She is like an exotic open secret,
Everybody want to get access to
but very few possess the favor to read her.
16th Jun 2014 7:53am
Hi Solomon,Good morning!!!Yes!Give her of the fruit of her hands and let her own works praise her in the gates!!!
Thank you Mr. Wisdom for the comment!I appreciate!!!
Mwuuahhh!
Lovely day!!!!
Thank you Mr. Wisdom for the comment!I appreciate!!!
Mwuuahhh!
Lovely day!!!!
15th Jun 2014 7:42pm
I can not say any words for what I read in you. I am so amazed at what you see and how you let me see it all I can say is thank you♥
16th Jun 2014 8:05am
Hi dear!Thank you!Really am honored by your kind words!
I also wanna say thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to show you my world through my work!!!
Thanks!!!
Good day and God bless you!!!
Mwuuuaaahhhh!!!!!
I also wanna say thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to show you my world through my work!!!
Thanks!!!
Good day and God bless you!!!
Mwuuuaaahhhh!!!!!
18th Jun 2014 7:23pm
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