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Animal Lust
I am yours to use
You’re on top
You take what you want
You pinch my nipple then the other
You scratch my chest feeling your nails rub me raw
You pull my nipple hard with such command and power I wince in pain
You grind at your pace, taking your time and pleasure
You slap my hand away when I touch
You watch me as I climax
You slide down
I am yours forever
You’re on top
You take what you want
You pinch my nipple then the other
You scratch my chest feeling your nails rub me raw
You pull my nipple hard with such command and power I wince in pain
You grind at your pace, taking your time and pleasure
You slap my hand away when I touch
You watch me as I climax
You slide down
I am yours forever
Published 8th Jun 2014
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8th Jun 2014 10:53pm
this seems to read better w/o the repetition of the 1st line after each subsequent line. the pace is quicker & makes for a better effect of domination. other than that, very well composed...
8th Jun 2014 11:05pm
9th Jun 2014 3:33am
Anonymous
9th Jun 2014 1:15am
Short and concise.. Very good poem in my opinion!
10th Jun 2014 12:28pm
9th Jun 2014 4:16am
10th Jun 2014 12:29pm
9th Jun 2014 5:11am
You pinch my nipple
then the other
did u know
this is the basis of
modern business
buy one get one free
good now u know it
then the other
did u know
this is the basis of
modern business
buy one get one free
good now u know it
10th Jun 2014 12:30pm
I know that I have been treated that way a number of times. One more time down the rabbit hole Alice.
Anonymous
9th Jun 2014 7:56am
Welcome to DI!! This is a very HOT start. Enjoyed this sexy piece. :)
10th Jun 2014 12:33pm
Thank you, I especially enjoyed "suds" and think you are very good with a turn of phrase. I appreciate your thoughts.
That fervent carnal lust shows its hunger nicely with this erotic scene. Welcome to dup and thanks for sharing :)
10th Jun 2014 12:36pm
Thank you and I am glad to find a forum for sharing and getting feedback
14th Jun 2014 6:20pm
22nd Jun 2014 00:41am
Thank you, I enjoy your work. I like the imagery, one "to make the "Belle" ring."
22nd Jun 2014 5:54am
Well ty so much darlin'. Lord knows this lil Belle loves to ring.
Xoxoxo
Belle
Xoxoxo
Belle
