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Languid and Bittersweet
Our love isn't measured by thrust
anymore
It's measured by understanding
and sharing
Pieces of a life so enthralling,
just brushing against each other
In the night is our erotic
Nobody can own universal romance
You take a vow and live within the glorious
and the bittersweet moments
Walking hand in hand, a union of spirits,
a collective of love
That's our love, brilliantly shining, dancing
in a summer breeze
anymore
It's measured by understanding
and sharing
Pieces of a life so enthralling,
just brushing against each other
In the night is our erotic
Nobody can own universal romance
You take a vow and live within the glorious
and the bittersweet moments
Walking hand in hand, a union of spirits,
a collective of love
That's our love, brilliantly shining, dancing
in a summer breeze
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8th Jun 2014 7:56am
I'm in total agreement with the poetess's who have already commented.. simply lovely and beautiful Sir..with much respect to you ..xoxo domore
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8th Jun 2014 8:52pm
That's absolutely amazing! You pictured matured love in such a sparkling way that we cannot but long for it. Love it.
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