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I Gave You Too Much
I give you my time
I give you my space
I give you the chance
To see my face
I give you no doubt
I give you support
I give you my loyalty
What is it worth
I give you the key
I give you my heart
I give you my soul
And get torn apart
I gave you too much
I gave you too deep
I gave you everything
Which now I will keep
I give you my space
I give you the chance
To see my face
I give you no doubt
I give you support
I give you my loyalty
What is it worth
I give you the key
I give you my heart
I give you my soul
And get torn apart
I gave you too much
I gave you too deep
I gave you everything
Which now I will keep
Published 8th Jun 2014
| Edited 19th Jan 2015
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8th Jun 2014 8:34pm
Anonymous
8th Jun 2014 9:04pm
I gave you all out it? Doesn't quite make sense to me jrh187. Apart from that I think there's some excellent writing flow here.
