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Bodies
I saw his flirtive look
Through the bodies
amongst other bric a brac
between us
flashbacks replayed
in slow motion
till up close
Brushing past
his hand
pausing
remembering his caress
my nakedness craved
waiting
he delivered
looking back
with that secret smile
Through the bodies
amongst other bric a brac
between us
flashbacks replayed
in slow motion
till up close
Brushing past
his hand
pausing
remembering his caress
my nakedness craved
waiting
he delivered
looking back
with that secret smile
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Re: Bodies
7th Jun 2014 1:03pm
Re: Bodies
7th Jun 2014 2:30pm
Bric a brac - back and forth - like the tension and chemistry Rose - cool writings
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Re: Bodies
9th Jun 2014 5:24am
awesome I really enjoyed this, and could feel the excitement of that secret look.
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Re: Bodies
10th Jun 2014 5:28am