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WOULD YOU PLEASE
Would you please stay out of my dreams beautiful. I love how you appear and sensuously tease, leaving me solid like cast iron when I come too or awake. Never tasting the sweetest kisses you bestow in my slumber. Nor the sexy caresses of your gorgeous ass or healthy squeezes of beautiful breasts as they sway sweetly, with nipples of marble. How would you react if I stuck my tongue so far inside hot adorable you, I could taste your tomorrows' thoughts of me? How would sexy you react if I were your B.O.B. attached too your seat, snug deep inside while you're having dinner? Could gorgeous you cum, chewing? In my visions of slumber, I'm delighted by those intense faces you make, taking my tongue like you do. How would you react if I had delicious you for breakfast? I mean your adorably sexy round bubble on my plate, legs spread wide with six drops of syrup covering your now hard clit? Always mesmerized by your sexy walk, fills my mental with possibilities of what pretty you can do too me. My eyes dance watching you pick up things bent over, especially when you look flirtatiously back and smile. How would you react if I were your favorite undies, my tongue lined your crotch, after a few steps would you ever take me off, being turned on? Licking you with every step for hours. I dream of sexy you day and night wishing you'd become my reality. So would you please stay out of my dreams? And come too me...
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
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6th Jun 2014 9:24pm
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7th Jun 2014 7:31pm
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6th Jun 2014 9:24pm
My dear sir,
Reading this makes me want to offer myself to you and make those sweet dreams a reality by coming to you and indulging in all those succulent activities u described here....... i would let you b my favorite undies and your tongue could be the lining and i never ever (well almost)
would take you off -- can you tell i like your poem very much -- very very yummy indeed.....:) <3
Reading this makes me want to offer myself to you and make those sweet dreams a reality by coming to you and indulging in all those succulent activities u described here....... i would let you b my favorite undies and your tongue could be the lining and i never ever (well almost)
would take you off -- can you tell i like your poem very much -- very very yummy indeed.....:) <3
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7th Jun 2014 7:33pm
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6th Jun 2014 11:58pm
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7th Jun 2014 7:34pm
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Would you please lemmi stay in your dreams?
Where everything goes,no limitations of physical fatigue,time or distance and unproximity*
Where night and day=orgasms and every hiss and sound is not restricted by carnal knowledge...
Would you please...
Where everything goes,no limitations of physical fatigue,time or distance and unproximity*
Where night and day=orgasms and every hiss and sound is not restricted by carnal knowledge...
Would you please...
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7th Jun 2014 7:36pm
YES You can stay just a little longer!!LOL!!
Thanxx sweets for the nice comment!!
Thanxx sweets for the nice comment!!
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7th Jun 2014 3:21pm
Lancelott, my sexy, 'naughty' Knight,
To be certain,Thou hast penned perfection on parchment with this piece!
Aaaahhhh...to be a part of thy fantasy realm...'twould be such bliss...pure pleasure--INDEED!!! Thy incredibly enticing lines hath set passion's fire ablaze--deep within thy loyal sorceress's heart with .....
Such a Sensual Scribe !!
To be certain,Thou hast penned perfection on parchment with this piece!
Aaaahhhh...to be a part of thy fantasy realm...'twould be such bliss...pure pleasure--INDEED!!! Thy incredibly enticing lines hath set passion's fire ablaze--deep within thy loyal sorceress's heart with .....
Such a Sensual Scribe !!
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7th Jun 2014 7:39pm
My sweet Sorceress, It is a pleasure to always see you in my comments, you are truly adored!!
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7th Jun 2014 4:14pm
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7th Jun 2014 7:40pm
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7th Jun 2014 7:32pm
"Never tasting the sweetest kisses you bestow in my slumber" something so beautifully enchanting and romantic about that line...Bravo Sir that was Fabulous!!!
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7th Jun 2014 7:41pm
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7th Jun 2014 11:00pm
Yes I quite agree, this poem has many new nuances
and flair. I love the direction you went and love the adjectives used in this piece Lance, very vivid. Nice read great write!
You go big Daddy*
Broomie
and flair. I love the direction you went and love the adjectives used in this piece Lance, very vivid. Nice read great write!
You go big Daddy*
Broomie
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8th Jun 2014 10:31pm
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8th Jun 2014 2:44am
A great read Lancelott, the flow is damn near perfect keep it up, youre a dangerous mind indeed.
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8th Jun 2014 10:32pm
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8th Jun 2014 2:45pm
Dreamy indeed-The Man Lance Pens the unforgettable Dream Girl-She'll no doubt be cumming soon!!!-Excellence as Always Sir!!!
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8th Jun 2014 10:35pm
Bro. SOUL "DA MAN" The INK keeper!!
Mucho Thanks and Respect always man!!
Mucho Thanks and Respect always man!!
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8th Jun 2014 4:15pm
Whew!!! Damn that was hot! Lance this is such a sensual and sexy piece. Love it! I'll revisit this one for sure ;-)
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8th Jun 2014 10:29pm
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"How would you react if I stuck my tongue so far inside hot adorable you, I could taste your tomorrows' thoughts of me?"
OMG! Would you really like to hear my answer to this? What an adorable piece, Lance! Hot and spicy = delicious!
OMG! Would you really like to hear my answer to this? What an adorable piece, Lance! Hot and spicy = delicious!
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8th Jun 2014 10:36pm
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8th Jun 2014 11:31pm
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8th Jun 2014 11:34pm
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9th Jun 2014 8:23am
What a sexy poem!! A girl's sex dreams come true? Wow!! I'm hot now. Thanks for sharing. Truly loved this.
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11th Jun 2014 4:05pm
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9th Jun 2014 10:40am
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11th Jun 2014 4:06pm
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9th Jun 2014 1:01pm
" leaving me solid like cast iron when I come too"...mmmm now the comments I could expand on here...awakening from a dream like that...could lead to dreams coming true! :)
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11th Jun 2014 4:09pm
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11th Jun 2014 3:15pm
"Never tasting the sweetest kisses you bestow in my slumber."<--really like this line, Lance! Sexy! Xo
Pen Love~
Pen Love~
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11th Jun 2014 4:10pm
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11th Jun 2014 4:09pm
Damn bro. Gotta admit, your skill with
Erotic ink is BAR NONE... Truly heated
thoughts here! :)
Erotic ink is BAR NONE... Truly heated
thoughts here! :)
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11th Jun 2014 4:12pm
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11th Jun 2014 11:55pm
Mmmmmmmm....my southern womanly ways just woke up. I think I am the one who was dreaming. ;-)
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12th Jun 2014 00:29am
My Beautiful lil southern belle I appreciate you!!
Please read more if you'd like!!
Thanxxx sweets!!
Please read more if you'd like!!
Thanxxx sweets!!
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14th Jun 2014 5:19am
Mmmmmmm! This is the sweetest fantasy!! The erotic agony teasing your mind!! It's so sexy & especially loved "How would you react if I stuck my tongue so far inside hot adorable you, I could taste your tomorrows' thoughts of me?" Mmmm is all i wanna say hah, very arousing! I love your depictions!
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