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meaningless friendships
Your words, too fake
Maybe the heads to baked
Friendships meaningless
communication dissolved
My honesty became blah blah
Sympathy turned deformity
Now the cuts you describe
tells a secret story hoping
One cuts deep enough to end
your misery. ..
Learn self respect before
Respecting others
Love yourself before others
And go fuck yourself happily.
Maybe the heads to baked
Friendships meaningless
communication dissolved
My honesty became blah blah
Sympathy turned deformity
Now the cuts you describe
tells a secret story hoping
One cuts deep enough to end
your misery. ..
Learn self respect before
Respecting others
Love yourself before others
And go fuck yourself happily.
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Re: meaningless friendships
5th Jun 2014 6:26am
Oh wow boo! Now, if I interpreted this in a sane way, I would say someone pissed you off, and the friendship or whatever you want to call it, had to mean something, otherwise you wouldn't be venting. But if I read it as insane, like you normally write when you're in your dark zone, I would think you're talking about yourself, to yourself... Xo
My inbox is always open, you know that...Xo
My inbox is always open, you know that...Xo
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2014 8:51am
Sweet Smiles.......this breaks me to feel your hurt. Sound so disappointed in someone very close to you wasn't who you thought they were. Sorry to feel a broken friendship. Sending luv and hugs your way. MAWH xo :)
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re: Re: meaningless friendships
6th Jun 2014 1:08am
I'm pretty sure I'm at fault but I just need to find out what...thanks for understanding... Xoxo
Re: meaningless friendships
5th Jun 2014 5:03pm
the one above
blocked me for sure
so I don't read her anymore
but she's the floweriest poet on DUP
that's for sure
hope she gives me a chance
once more
to her poetry adore..
blocked me for sure
so I don't read her anymore
but she's the floweriest poet on DUP
that's for sure
hope she gives me a chance
once more
to her poetry adore..
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re: Re: meaningless friendships
6th Jun 2014 1:09am
She is a beautiful soul...hopefully she would've forgiven you for whatever the reason is...good luck
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6th Jun 2014 8:58am
u must convey
else how will she
allow or know or not curse or not follow my verse
her poetry is beautiful
she hated a suggestion
that was my curse
i shan't again for her verse!
else how will she
allow or know or not curse or not follow my verse
her poetry is beautiful
she hated a suggestion
that was my curse
i shan't again for her verse!
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Re: meaningless friendships
9th Jun 2014 12:02pm
I feel hurt reading this I'm sorry for your pain
Let me know if I can help
-ava
Let me know if I can help
-ava
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re: Re: meaningless friendships
16th Jun 2014 3:53am
Re: meaningless friendships
24th Jun 2014 5:02am
Hey there i really love your poetry and between all of your poems this is so far the one i love the most. Can you please check out my poetry and give me advice on them?
Thanks you are really inspirational and i want to write just like you!!!
Thanks you are really inspirational and i want to write just like you!!!
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re: Re: meaningless friendships
24th Jun 2014 10:25pm
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23rd Jul 2014 7:54am
Re: meaningless friendships
23rd Jul 2014 6:47am
I love n feel the passion n this. Very well said. Adding to my reading list to refer to the next time i get pissed
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re: Re: meaningless friendships
23rd Jul 2014 7:57am
Thankyou for agreeing with me...some people are caught up in their own darkness self absorbed not realizing they're hurting the one's who care. ........ no sympathy and I dont expect it either.
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2014 4:46am
A few I think of with this. Good poem. Like! :)
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re: Re: meaningless friendships
19th Aug 2014 5:04am