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I must have been a turtle or a tortoise
I must have been slow
for this body doesn't know
how to be very fast
life doesn't seem to last
so I must have been old
no body wants to cuddle or hold
or something like that
a creature who didn't need a hat
*might add more to it I don't know*
for this body doesn't know
how to be very fast
life doesn't seem to last
so I must have been old
no body wants to cuddle or hold
or something like that
a creature who didn't need a hat
*might add more to it I don't know*
Published 3rd Jun 2014
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3rd Jun 2014 10:11pm
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8th Jun 2014 11:35am
good write, feels really short, though I actually tried sitting here looking at this to see how I could improve by making this longer an I got nothing lol, so overall nicely done, thanks for posting^_^
9th Jun 2014 4:36pm
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