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Whispers
She walks alone in the snow
He walks alone in her shadow
She does not stop him
he didn’t beg
she did not lead
they don’t pretend
She pulls in her breath deeply
pushing her feelings aside completely
adjusting her dress ever so
neatly…
He staggers forward
She leans back
He clutches his heart
She touches hers
He whispers goodbye
She whispers
please die ...
Copyright © June 2014 J. Doucette
All rights Reserved. June 2014
Published 2nd Jun 2014
| Edited 24th Jan 2025
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2nd Jun 2014 5:29am
2nd Jun 2014 3:17pm
OMG Crim ! It it so great to see you back, I have missed you so.
welcome back darling!Thanks for the read from me beautiful<3
Broomie
welcome back darling!Thanks for the read from me beautiful<3
Broomie
2nd Jun 2014 8:08pm
Yes thank you Po I was feeling deviant last night.
thanks for the ink love my friend<3
Broom
thanks for the ink love my friend<3
Broom
2nd Jun 2014 9:22pm
Dark, defiantly so. Conjures up a few thoughts and images that be not thought or seen
3rd Jun 2014 1:02am
3rd Jun 2014 8:33am
This reminds me of a song i'd written once, for a great (and fake) "love" of mine...
title "i hope you die"...
Thanks for this powerful ink, it did bring back memories of amazing rage :)
title "i hope you die"...
Thanks for this powerful ink, it did bring back memories of amazing rage :)
3rd Jun 2014 8:27pm
Yes I felt rage when I wrote it but a subtle type if you know what I mean, in loving spoonfuls of hate.
Broomie
Broomie
7th Jun 2014 6:50pm
7th Jun 2014 6:56pm
Anonymous
19th Jun 2014 3:29am
The ending gripped me! What a twist.....great write. Mercy!! :)
19th Jun 2014 3:47am
Hello ") Yeah I was in a mood when I wrote this
I love my husband to DEATH lol if you know what I mean ;) Thank you for the read I appreciated the time you take to read em..
Broomie
I love my husband to DEATH lol if you know what I mean ;) Thank you for the read I appreciated the time you take to read em..
Broomie
Anonymous
9th Jul 2014 6:28am
sometimes darkness can be beautiful, nice write.
10th Jul 2014 00:32am
Anonymous
10th Jul 2014 1:32am
hello and likewise.
Anonymous
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24th Feb 2015 6:25pm
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24th Feb 2015 7:04pm
You know it...
Yes love is a bitch sometimes....
Loves you
Zazzles
((((Willow xoxox))))))
Yes love is a bitch sometimes....
Loves you
Zazzles
((((Willow xoxox))))))
8th Mar 2016 3:34am
8th Mar 2016 3:40am
BANG!
OH!!! HA! BINGO!!!!!
brownie points fer shure****
HE HO!!!!
Zazzles Mwah!
You fucker u u got it spot on!!!
OH!!! HA! BINGO!!!!!
brownie points fer shure****
HE HO!!!!
Zazzles Mwah!
You fucker u u got it spot on!!!
8th Mar 2016 3:49am
they say the x in sex marks the spot...so i figured if i dug deep enough....:)
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