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Wired...(What,did you say something?)
They walk with eyes,
not looking out
only seeing in.
They listen with no ears
sound filling their heads,
but they can't hear.
Never stop to say
"after you"
got to go first
here and now
it's me,me,me.
The inward ones
always looking into themselves,
earplugs and wires filling their holes,
say "Hi" and they walk right by.
not looking out
only seeing in.
They listen with no ears
sound filling their heads,
but they can't hear.
Never stop to say
"after you"
got to go first
here and now
it's me,me,me.
The inward ones
always looking into themselves,
earplugs and wires filling their holes,
say "Hi" and they walk right by.
Published 26th May 2014
| Edited 13th Jun 2024
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26th May 2014 7:14pm
26th May 2014 8:14pm
Anonymous
26th May 2014 8:39pm
Yep.....that's how it is now days. I'm guilty of texting too much. LOL!!! enjoyed this. :)
26th May 2014 9:09pm
26th May 2014 9:12pm
oh gawd this is so me o.O my headphones are glued to my head.
enjoyed Mister Hash
enjoyed Mister Hash
26th May 2014 9:19pm
Take em out lol...as George Harrison would say "I don't need no Wah-Wah" (happy you enjoyed _shadoe_ :)
26th May 2014 10:47pm
well, I don't do the whole
plugged in wired up thing
when I'm out, but I often
walk past friends too busy
daydreaming to notice, which
I guess is just as bad..:)
plugged in wired up thing
when I'm out, but I often
walk past friends too busy
daydreaming to notice, which
I guess is just as bad..:)
26th May 2014 11:22pm
27th May 2014 2:39am
28th May 2014 1:14am
27th May 2014 3:02am
Earplugs/phones will effect your ear drum, in the long run.
Hashman...:) I don't use them...I have vertigo if I did. Wanna chat..lets sit on that park bench...
:) Good read.
Hashman...:) I don't use them...I have vertigo if I did. Wanna chat..lets sit on that park bench...
:) Good read.
28th May 2014 1:17am
Right Gracie...a nice park bench with the sights and sounds and smell of fresh air...can't get that from no wire :)
27th May 2014 5:14am
28th May 2014 1:21am
Right on Rain...I say smash em all and burn all the books...oh wait I'm getting a little nutty here (lol) :)
27th May 2014 9:12pm
They're imprisoned in themselves, shut the world out. Are they afraid? Indifferent? Would love to know, all the more since you painted the picture so intensely.
28th May 2014 1:24am
Anonymous
28th May 2014 2:53pm
yeah, it's like a zombie nation
let me out!!!! nice write hashman :) clever
let me out!!!! nice write hashman :) clever
28th May 2014 4:08pm
Einstein said "I fear the day technology will surpass our human interaction.The world will have a generation of idiots". (thanks mik) :)
28th May 2014 5:24pm
A generation withdrawn into the 'safety'(?) of one's own (selfish) existence....so easy to turn on...and tune out.
(it's sad that --most times--(my) earbuds, and headphones, have become more as appendages, than status symbols! :/ )
Definitely a message worth remembering, my friend!
(it's sad that --most times--(my) earbuds, and headphones, have become more as appendages, than status symbols! :/ )
Definitely a message worth remembering, my friend!
28th May 2014 6:10pm
Just getting up on my soapbox...preaching repent all,break free of your wires (lol) gotta watch out for the rotten tomatoes :)
19th Jul 2014 10:33pm
The new generation! On their cell phones, or ipods, not paying attention to anything. Exactly.
20th Jul 2014 12:35pm
