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a common currency...
and what would you have me
do, but change...
and what is change, if not
recieving back a little of what
we gave, since we gave too much...
do, but change...
and what is change, if not
recieving back a little of what
we gave, since we gave too much...
Published 25th May 2014
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25th May 2014 5:11pm
Mo Chara...i can surely feel the wistful sadness in this piece. It touches (me) deeply.
(Why is it that, when we desperately want to please, we so often give and g i v e so much of ourselves...that ultimately, we lose sight of whom we are truly meant to be....?)
Your ink flows with insight!
(Why is it that, when we desperately want to please, we so often give and g i v e so much of ourselves...that ultimately, we lose sight of whom we are truly meant to be....?)
Your ink flows with insight!
25th May 2014 6:13pm
27th May 2014 10:36pm
Speechless. That's so f***ing (pardon my French) great, Paul!!! You expressed the giving and taking thing between people or lovers so excellently. Impressive though sad.
27th May 2014 10:59pm
