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Naked
I want to see your nakedness
Feeling the skin that God created by hand
Touching every part that makes you woman
Fondling all the nasty parts & enjoying all the sensual areas
I want to see your nakedness
Revealing to me alone the secrets the world has yet to know
The passions that's trapped inside you
The primal lover that wants to release its appetite
Creating choas in the sheets of fornication
I want to see your nakedness
Allowing us to physically connect into a tribal frenzy as the spirits try to escape our bodies
Fluids exchanging with reckless abandoned within the place of pleasure
Sweat shines the heat that covers us with satisfaction
Do you want to see my nakedness?
Feeling the skin that God created by hand
Touching every part that makes you woman
Fondling all the nasty parts & enjoying all the sensual areas
I want to see your nakedness
Revealing to me alone the secrets the world has yet to know
The passions that's trapped inside you
The primal lover that wants to release its appetite
Creating choas in the sheets of fornication
I want to see your nakedness
Allowing us to physically connect into a tribal frenzy as the spirits try to escape our bodies
Fluids exchanging with reckless abandoned within the place of pleasure
Sweat shines the heat that covers us with satisfaction
Do you want to see my nakedness?
Published 23rd Mar 2011
| Edited 30th Jul 2011
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25th Mar 2011 6:39pm
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31st Jul 2011 9:22pm
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2011 11:37pm
The poem suggests that the person is new to poetry but very committed to improvement.
Vocabulary use is excellent as is description.
Great talent...
Vocabulary use is excellent as is description.
Great talent...
